Hi, I really enjoy writing. Also I want to become the best writer that I can be so I was wondering if anyone in this group could give me some critical feedback on my writing. I'm currently writing a spoken word origin story series telling the tale of how twenty two children were recruited into a soldier program.
One of the ones I've already released is linked below.
Once again, I would be extremely grateful to anybody who can just sit down, listen and give me some feedback.
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLfDEnr6vhnbprlAO-m6uoLwrcWaptezLt
I wasn't sure cause this one also was under critique.
thanks for clarifying
>>3018110
np, they currently have a critique thread running so be sure to not open your own or they will hate you