Looking for critique

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>>3011795

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>>3011796

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he made his own thread, the madman

>>3011795
the fact that there are a few odd/ nonsensical ratios of things makes me think you're aping someone elses style without really understanding it.

it's like those metal gear fans who chicken scratch..

dig beneath the surface. really try to understand why they do what they do. you're almost fucking there.

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>>3011834
They're somewhere between Gerhard Richter's overpainted photographs and the opening to the first season a True Detectives.

>>3011795
do you actually draw the faces yourself or are you just making a collage out of it? since you opened your own thread it had better be the fucking former.

>>3011795
is that geoff keighley?

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>>3011834
One has a weird ratio, yeah. The others are 1:1 and 2:5. Unless you are talking about the ratios of visual elements, then I could see that as well. I was afraid that it would be the case that there is too much direct influence of other artists :/

>>3012761
Thank you, I was not aware of his work but it is interesting. I thought that intro was pretty dope

>>3012777
I took the photographs that I used in the images.
I'm not sure what other thread this would have been relevant to post in.

>>3012786
Nope, it's one of my friends. All of these are photographs of my friends

>>3013016
well at least u took the photos. I dont know about the brushwork tho, doesnt complement that faces that much, even tho some of it works okay. Try looking up richard schmid or some other painter with nice broads brushstrokes for some more fluid work.