Critique my shit, niggas

The lips are messy and don't read well.
Ear details look like they need some clean up.

The rest looks fine.

>>2990395
Ohhhiiiiiyyyooooo gohhhzammuuuusssss just!!!! KANIGGEE WAHHHH

>>2990395
that is literally a jojo reference

>>2990428
Indeed. Kudos!

>>2990395
Well, it's certainly shit.

gureato desu yo

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>>2990395
YOU DID IT AGAIN

>closes the door and locks it

WHAT DID I TELL YOU, NEWFAG WHAT THE FUCK DID I TELL YOU LAST TIME

>undos belt
>grabs you from behind

STOP MAKING YOUR OWN FUCKING THREADS!

>throws you on the couch
>starts beating you with the belt
>smack
>smack
>smack

STOP *smack MAKING *smack YOUR *smack OWN *smack THREADS!!

READ THE FUCKING STICKY! *smack

POST IN THREADS THAT ALREADY EXIST!!! *smack

>you're bleeding and crying now
>smack
>smack

GET *smack IT THROUGH *smack YOUR SKULL!! *smack

YOU'RE WHY MOMMY LEFT, YOU FUCKING IDIOT!! *smack

STOP MAKING ME DO THIS!! *smack

>smack
>smack
>smack
>smack

FUCK!!

>throws you to the ground
>you lay in a heap sobbing
>reties belt

I HAD BETTER NOT SEE ANOTHER FUCKING THREAD FROM YOU AGAIN. YOU POST IN THAT GODDAMNED BEG THREAD WITH YOUR RETARD FRIENDS AND YOU DON'T COME OUT AGAIN!! YOU UNDERSTAND ME!!!

>unlocks door
>leaves you to find the loomis books

>>2990623
amazing

Why is trying to be araki so common among random internet boys

>>2990623
what a ride

>>2990712
It feels "cool and unique". I went by that so I know.

>>2990395
The back of the chin looks like it was drawn by a character designer from dexter's lab in stark contrast to the rest which is like the character design from an 80s anime. All and all pretty good the chin reaches a bit far back and the ear is in a weird place.

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>>2990395
looks like everyone came here to say the same thing

>>2990712
>trying to be araki
Not OP, but is it bad that I'm inspired by him and that it has pushed me to draw more realistically?

>random internet boys
You mean girls

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>>2990395
You're working in a very flat style so maybe it won't matter much but it tends to look awkward when jaws are overly sharp because there's a saliva gland behind the jaw.