You see these are some artworks of mine, lately I have a lot of free time and I get to draw A LOT more, I have this mind concept about my drawings but you know, my
technique isn't that good.
some advices so I can improve?
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Anatomy in relation to other anatomy and construction. Stop focusing on stylization so much and focus on making sure your basic forms connect to each other properly at proper proportions. Look at pic 1's pelvis and thighs in relation to the torso, for instance. The thighs and ass are flat, and the pelvis doesn't sit will with the torso.
>>2989170
anatomy is a bit off: necks too thin, there should be a chin visible, the arms and shoulderblades don't match (they should correspond).
i do like your last piece though, much cleaner lines but maybe chill on the hair follicles esp in front of her torso.
also stop using anime to learn proportions, you'll skew your understanding of the body