r8?

Try cleaning up your lines better, you could fix that in general by using lighter strokes. Also the head doesn't look like it's reaching down, it looks like it was just stichted onto the underside of the torso. Also stop drawing my little pony you won't learn much by doin this

>>2979227
Two more thing the tail also looks like it was glued onto the ass. The asshole also looks like the chrome icon

>>2976969
bad

>>2976969
If you want to stray from the show's original style and go more 3d you should look up the sticky first.

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>>2976969

>>2976969
A fair b8/10