Freddy Krueger sketch (ballpoint)

Did you trace this?

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Nvm I think I found the reference
its not as shocking as the source and it primarily has to do with the fact that he isn't looking at the viewer. The easiest way to make an impact is eye contact. When I look at the eyes in your sketch,freddy doesn't look like a scary demon out for revenge,he looks like a thirsty post-op burn victim who's eyeing the bottle of water in my hands.
Also it might just be me but that tounge is too small.
The details on the sweater's collar and cuffs, as well as on the brim of the hat, are nice touches but it doean't save whats going on with the face.

TLDR;The eyes and tounge make your sketch look a bit silly, not scary.

>>2974947
A stencil of sorts. Is he licking the blood off the blade?

Thats not how you use this board