Judge me

>>2968886
Bump

>>2968886
Buml

>>2968886
this sort of bullshit might get you to CalArts but it will only get you hate here
fuck off this is shit

>>2968898
Thanx what do you think of my layout and composition tho?

>>2968886
Garbage/10
Stop bumping this is a slow board
Go to the beginner thread

>>2968922
How very insightful and constructive pls stfu if you cant critique properly

>>2968943
I like it, though I don't know WTF it is

>>2968947
I just started cutting a magazine and pasting, i was focusing on the layout and composition. Does it feel disconnected or is it a whole?

>>2968943
Stupid fucking faggot nigger

You have a heirarchy of three main focus points,
The second of which you ruin by creating a tangent althought the blue paper helps break this up a bit
The zebras are pointless and should be removed as they just clutter the page and repeat successful elements however this only serves to cheapen the first use ofmsaid elements. You have multiple instances of directionless attempts at creating interest which fall flat, namely the dots and the text bar to the left which reek of pseudo-intellectual dialogue. Your technique is amatuerish and sloppy and you could have stretched the bounds of your medium instead of half-heartedly settling for a highschool level of execution.
You're also a cunt.

>>2968962
Thank you
Was that too much?

>>2968964
Yeah actually, it was. Respect the board and post in the beginner thread. Delete this thread you fucking newfag

>>2968964
How can i syretch the bounds of my medium?

>>2968968
Not telling you until you do this
>>2968967

Stop being a shitter and read the sticky