Attempting modern art

>>2964077
>that line weight
>that color selection
>that proportions of rectangles

not gonna make it

Read Kandisnky's On Spirituality in art.
The basic idea behind modernism is to portrait things as they feel.
maybe start with the very early modernist like Van Gogh or Scriabin.

>>2964077
Uninspired thematic that has literally nothing interesting going on. There is nothing visually apealing or interesting about this piece. You use dull midtone colors that have neither contrast in value, nor in saturation. Your failed attempt to utilize a tetrad color scheme is just the icing on that shitcake you created.
On the technical side this is literally MS Paint. If it had brushstrokes or any kind of visual cue it would at least be something. No offense, but his is literally the most expressionless bland piece I've seen all week.

>>2964082
I started with thinner lines, but then the colors seemed to blend too much. What don't you like about the colors?

>>2964086
Will do, thanks for the recommendation.

>>2964088
Fair enough. Fwiw, I did use MS Paint. Wanted some feedback before actually painting it.

File: rayo_2.jpg (21KB, 340x343px) Image search: [Google]

21KB, 340x343px

>>2964086
And if you want to do non representational stuff think on formal qualities, like how shapes and colors relate to each other.
Omar Rayo (see pic) is a good example of pure shapes, colors and form having an effect of their own

>>2964077
you could you be classically trained and so bad at art, i don't buy it, fuck off

>>2964095
That is fucking garbage.