CRIT ME

where do you newfags come from? does "lurk moar" not apply anymore? what is this shit? is /ic/ the "let me shill my crappy art in my own threads XD" board now?
its like you did everything wrong intentionally, anon. at least you arent a namefag.

also
>2887x1755
what is this? a picture for people with ridiculously large monitors? get outta here

fuck off

>>2959733
Post in a beginner tread faggot.

>>2959747
i can't deny that i'm a newfag. but isn't that what this board is for, i know 4chan is filled with autists , but i thought you fuckers would atleast understand what " critic " meant. instead of saying " EVERYTHING IS WRONG" maybe say some specific things , thats why i'm here after all.

And excuse me that you are still working on a 1997 Dell monitor anon

>i'm a newfag
>i can't read
fuck off

*smack*

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>>2959762
Oh look, it's you again. I hope you know passing off other artist's work as your own is against the board rules.

In the unlikey case that you're the original artist, please request critique in the draw thread, unless you want your portfolio reviewed or are showcasing a sequence of artwork.

Your figure drawing is going in the right direction but I'd advise you to step back from anime and practice some life drawing. Your biggest problem aside from advanced subjects like color and composition is perspective. Before you practice anything else, go back to drawing boxes, no kidding. I'll leave some recommendations, nonetheless.

Books:
- Perspective made Easy
- Sketching The Basics
- Scott Robertson's How to Draw
- Peter Han's Dynamic Bible (useful with course)

Online courses:
- draw a box (lesson 1 + 2)
- Peter Han's Dynamic Sketching
- Scott Robertson's YT channel

>>2959733

I don't like handing out timeouts. Don't make me give you a 3 day timeout.

>>2959782
Timeouts? kek

What are you, a mod? If so, why don't you do your fucking job, faggot.

Also aren't regular bans 24h? I hope you get a timeout for being a spamming impersonator.

>>2959783
*smack*

>>2959733
Perspective looks really off to me in alost all the images. Also your line wieght is lost in the color. You're flats look 2x better than the final versions. And the backgrounds look pretty lazy. Its a girl in the forest with some random light going on her. Whats the point of that?

I give it an honest C.

>>2959780
nah i'm the original artist. thanks for the recomendations. and why the "draw tread" isn't this one for critcs and the other one just for drawing recomendations and full blown weebs?

>>2959824
a C , well thats atleast higher than what i'dd give it. with lineweight you probably mean i should stop colouring the lines and more effort into the backgrounds. got it.
ps. randome light is the sun but if that was confusing then i should proably put more effort in to that too

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But /ic/ told me artstation was only used by professionals, did you guys lie to me?

>>2960035
anyone can go on artstation its just that its mostly designed for profesionals. its just that the amatures ,like me , aren't aware of the site yet. i like how the site looks and you can only comment if you have posted atleast one thing so i just joined.