is it cool to post jewelry for critique or is it just drawing stuff ?
This board is about 95% illustration/painting, usually these threads get directed to /diy/.
>>2953508
i'd like to look at it, and i can offer some opinions but, idk how useful it'd be
>>2953508
It's just drawing here for the most part. The DIY board might be better for jewelry? I'm not sure.
Since you're here anyway i'll give my critique
The use of color is nice and you wrapped the wire in an aesthetically pleasing way. I think the shard-like crystals combined with the smaller pieces AND the center stone however is off balance in a way. Either all shards with the big piece, or shards and small ones without the big piece, or small pieces with the center piece.
You might get away with all three if you patterened it out a bit better.
That said that's just my opinion as someone who likes homemade jewelry and is very particular. As for actual craftsmanship I can't say because I only know how to make very simple hemp jewelry (tying knots and picking out the beads an crystals to use) so I can't tell you if your techniques are shitty or not.
Good luck anon it has promise and someone else might like the design just fine. I'm picky.
>>2953508
i dont like the wire, seems out of place.
/cgl/ doesn't have a thread up right now, but there's generally a resin/home-made jewelry thread. I remember someone posting some of their wire wrap jewelry stuff and getting crit, so I'd take a gander through the offsite archives and look for it.
thanks guys. i agree with some of those statements im not super proud of this one for certain reasons too. i have more but ill post on more fitting board