halp with drawring

Beginner here, but I'll try.
You should try sketching the volumes of the various body parts before drawing them.
The ribcage is flat, the shoulders are attached weirdly. You basically didn't draw the neck.
There's no difference in size between the torso, the waist and the hips. The leg on the left should be partially covered by the other one. The planes of the head aren't defined.
The feet are too short and they have to shape at all. The breasts are too high, the arms are too thin.
You should work on your lines, too.

tl; dr: the thread for beginners is HERE >>2949787, don't make threads for a single drawing. Read the sticky and the page linked in the first /beg/ post.