The first digital artwork I've done. How can I improve ?
Line weight
>>2944258
Put dicks on at least two of the girls.
Use less lines. Make more confident strokes. If you have SAI, use that for lineart and turn on the stabilizer so you don't have those wavy chunker lines.
>>2944264
this
>>2944258
blog?
based on the line work, it looks like you traced over an image.