Porn Thread

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Started this but the legs look all wrong help is needed.

why a dick? These thread never start with pussy in the OP.

>>2927211
There's no ic in pussy

>>2927182
The legs look stiff, like she's uncomfortably holding them up.

Relax them a little. Plus they look short.

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posted in last style thread but got no response ;-;

>>2927182
The legs on the right side seem to be floating above the bed, making the characters appear to just be drawn overtop of the background instead of actually interacting with it
I suggest removing his hand from lifting her leg and just letting both legs on the right rest on the bed.
That or you could rotate the entire drawing of the people while keeping the background still so they look more vertical and their hip angle lines up with the bed angle.

>>2927181
is that popcorn around the dick?

>>2927611
Awkward posing and gesture, decidedly unsexy.

>>2927693
It's stars because he's trying his best

>>2927611
His belly button is too high!
The belly button is usually a midpoint between the diaphragm and cock base

>>2927738
Also you drew the diaphragm too low, rib cages slope much higher

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>>2927693
pop pop

>>2927716
that's the shit i'm looking for

unfortunately i might've bit off more than i can chew in my attempts to draw a character laying down from above, no real clue how to gesture that, like all the mumbo jumbo in my head is about following the weight x motion of the character but viewing somebody lying down from above is like ???

regardless tried moving things around a bit but still feels unsatisfactory, tried a few more quick thumbnails to explore other possibilities, might move on to something else and come back to this later

>>2927738
>>2927740
i always landmarked the bellybutton by imagining a band around the top of the illiac crest and plotting it there. i do need to study the landmarks of the chest more tho, right now i'm just kinda guessing/moving marks around until they feel right/thinking purely in proportions

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>>2927850
He feels weightless, the reclining pose on the right at least looks like it making contact with something.

I think foreshortening would help, maybe arch the back, give him a little contrapposto, add some folds and wrinkles in the sheets to convey his body weight. Give him presence!

Quick sketch to illustrate, hope it helps.

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so, what do you think?

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what did I do wrong?

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I do not usually do lewds, I just did this for fun.

Fucking destroy my ass please

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>>2928521
Fuck, here's the resized. Sorry for raping your connection

>>2928521
Colours are shit. Blend things smoother for a better look

Please never use ps for linework unless your hands are steady or you wanna use lazy ngmi. Or just use sai.

Her abs sorta look sloppy, polish up on abs anatomy

Dick girls are for gay

Nice taste in goul tho. Franky is good teir. At least your not a draculara fag

>>2928523
dick: good
face: oh no

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>>2927850
Oh, so he's not jogging in place.
In that case gesture does not suggest that he's resting on a surface. Specifically strange leg positioning and back tilted pelvis.

>>2928541
Why not use ps for line?

>>2928541
>Please never use ps for linework unless your hands are steady or you wanna use lazy ngmi. Or just use sai.
clearly your're fucking new

>>2928691
>>2928693
Cause that linework is shit

>>2928523
>what is perspective
>what is anatomy
>what is shading
>what are values

pretty much all your fundamentals are crap. learn those (you'll need a few years) and then we can try this again.

>>2928890
>this drawing sucks
is not constructive criticism
don't bother criticising people's stuff when you can't give advice

also im not that anon before you attack him

>>2928899
oh no, don't worry, I'll attack you instead.
If a drawing is beginner tier level, I'm not gonna waste my time explaining what is wrong by doing a redline of basically EVERYTHING. explaining in detail how to fix EVERYTHING would be a huge waste of time as well.
can your brain now process this and understand why what I posted above IS constructive criticism?
the guy is shit, yet he wants to draw complex things like appealing porn. guess what, he can't. not until he learns all that I mentioned.
now please, dear anon, GTFO.

>>2928541
>>2928550
>>2928811
>>2928890
Thanks, boys. I will take this information and try to polish up on things before moving on.

a few things before I go off though

>>2928541
If dick girl is for gay, is vagina man for straight?
Also, who is best goul if not Franky
>>2928550
Thanks dude, I will work on my qt girl faces. I made this last night and looking at it now Jesus fuck how did I let that face slide. Glad you like the dick tho
>>2928890
I get the others, as I think most of the anatomy is fucked aside from the arms, and I did no value work and just went into color, doing flat color and the shading was an afterthought. But let my retard flag fly for a second here. Perspective? How do I apply perspective here? And what makes my perspective errors, perspective errors and not anatomy errors?

>>2928899
Don't bug the guy. It was more helpful than nothing. His advice is I have weak spots in my fundamentals and he is right

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>>2927181
anything off before i go to the inking phase?

>>2928911
This is literaly the very thing ruining this board.
Mastering the fundamentals takes years. A good teacher can give advice that can improve a person's work no mather the level, see this for an excellent post:
>>2927885

>>2928946
Also you can draw appealing porn, at various levels of skill, the most important thing in porn is sex appeal.

>>2928946
he gave advice to someone that is not a complete beginner. that's the big difference. giving in depth advice to someone that doesn't understand fundamentals is a big waste of time. period.
again, GTFO.

>>2928943
stiff pose, boring expression, neck and head are badly positioned, her left upper arm is too short.

>>2928919
>I get the others, as I think most of the anatomy is fucked aside from the arms, and I did no value work and just went into color, doing flat color and the shading was an afterthought. But let my retard flag fly for a second here. Perspective? How do I apply perspective here? And what makes my perspective errors, perspective errors and not anatomy errors?

perspective is the most fundamental of all fundamentals. everything is affected by perspective. every-thing. If you can't figure out how this works, then you should really pick up some beginner art books. and maybe also broaden your general views about the world a bit. not just in regards to art.

>>2928966
Ok, I get that. I thought the pose I chose with her being eye level wouldn't bring on any discrepancies, but now I see the flaws you're getting at (the shoulder, the pelvis, ext) how they aren't related to the anatomical issues (boobs, face,deltoids, ect.). I'll be more careful to box out my underdrawing rather than focusing so hard on the curves.

Thanks for the help everyone. I'm gonna fuck off now and go back to boxes and value studies. Have a good one

>>2928980
I know my wording is harsh and all, but I do it for a reason. let me tell you this tho, you have a great attitude. just keep working hard and with such a mindset you'll get far.

>>2928980
>gets shit on in thread for mediocre artwork, not bad, far from good though
>every other post belittles them, makes title seem worse than it is
>still remains calm when almost every other typical d/ic/k would sperg out. Takes vague, almost worthless critique and uses it to find the flaws in his work
>goes back to studying the flaws to overcome them

Keep going dude. With the attitude you've shown, you're gmi. You just need to polish up those skills

>>2928989
he needs to learn them first, to be able to polish them. the critique was on point. and it's great that the guy understood that. great attitude, which is basically the only thing I agree with you.

>>2927850
your work looks familiar, did you use to post your drawings on another chan?

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any advice will be apreciated

>>2928960
That other guy is not a complete beginner either, dumbass.

>>2928943
>that pose
>not barefoot

waste

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I don't feel like my stuff got any sex appeal. What's missing? Is it my style?
Critique on everything else that looks like shit is much appreciated too

>>2928521
Dr. Frankenstein, sir... I dont think that's what the scroll mean when it said "Spare Parts"... I must say =/

>>2929381
You have problems with foreshortening, that leftmost leg is the worst offender. As for sex appeal, think of it like acting.

Is he demure, lacivious, aloof, what's his motivation? If you can convey that to a viewer through their gaze, their posture, it allows a viewer to connect with the subject and it's sensuality.

That's the emotional part of it, the physical part just comes out of what you're into. You "know" what looks good, you taste is great! Now quantity it. Seems like you're into twink boys, what are their attributes? Look at art, look at many mediums. How does a writer describe the arch of his back, his lithe dancer's body?How would you draw that?

DRAW FROM LIFE.

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Eager for feedback after a bit more work, any sort of critique, please.

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Can I just ask what the deal is with Sonic the Hedgehog being in porn?

I mean, gay is one thing. Furry is another thing. But what the fuck? Why is Sonic so popular?

>>2929513

I'll promise that I will give one to you in up to 10h.

>>2929307
not a complete beginner, but a beginner none the less.
the other guy has a much better understanding of fundamentals. if you can't see that, then I guess you are just another scrub.
now gtfo already.

>>2929381
>what is perspective and foreshortening
>what are fundamentals
get your stuff in the beginners thread.

>>2929715
nah im staying and i call out shitposters like you
if you cant give advice dont post

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please critikcc. ignore color job.

>>2929723
>if you cant give advice dont post
same goes to you shithead.
if you are here to call out presumed shitposters, then you might as well stop posting, tardo.
why are you talking to me instead to your beloved scrubby anon chan there. cmon, go help them. they have such great potential. they'll understand all you will say.
fucking kek.
again, gtfo.

>>2927611
Maybe a personal thing, but the glans looks too small. :I

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>>2928058

>>2929587
The Sonic fandom is something no one will ever be able to explain.

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>>2929587
Sonic himself? No idea, maybe fangirls draw this stuff or something.
Now the Sonic Girls however...

>>2927887
Its ok

>>2929744
What's supposed to behind her? A bag of loot?

And Sonic girls are the best.

>>2929723
Dude, it's nice and all but stop defending me lol

He was right, pointed out my flaws, and I was able to evaluate my weaknesses. I took the knowledge and I'll come back to this thread If I decide to draw porn again and I'm a higher lvl. I don't see what the big issue is. All this arguing is ruining the flow of this thread. Besides, he was more helpful than you all are making him out to be

>>2928982
>>2928989
Thanks, dudes. If I've got anything, it's the right attitude as of now. I just need to work more on a better routine and doing the proper exercises to maximize gains. Does anyone have any tips?

>>2929424
Well I really wanted to make the perfect wife for my monster, and we all know the best wives have dicks

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>>2928058
Faces.
try to lewd them up.

>>2929299
Kinda boring looking.

Outside of that, Nothing too terrible so far.

>>2929732
Did you use a reference?.

just woke up from a dream about an intergalactic space race of futa girls

i'm not drawing that but hey if you're short on ideas go big

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>>2927611
pic very related

>>2929821
child porn is not allowed, tardo.

>>2929513
are you referencing a very specific saltyicecream gif?

>>2930246
Not intentionally?

>>2929824
No i did not use a reference

>>2930403
It looks fat desu
remove jowl.

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more of my stuff ;)

>tfw grinding fundamentals just so that I can one day draw lewds

Is it a bad idea to practice by drawing lewds when you're still shit? I think I'd end up feeling embarassed at what I'd produced. I feel like I'm going to have to crank out several hundred generic animu grill pics before I finally have the skill to start drawing passable futa inflation vore porn.

>>2930465
cute

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Study of >>2929513 , not a redline.
Any tips on drawing multiple characters? How do you stage them, by drawing the touching parts first, plotting your perspective, something other?
Mine always turn out to float in the void.

>>2927885
Thanks for protecting /ic/'s reputation and overall quality, anon.

>>2930522
Do both.
/ic/ will tell you to only grind fundamentals, but to avoid a burn-out draw also what you like, explore various styles, themes, expand your visual library. If it turns out shit, that's fine, keep it to look back to and mark your progress.

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Well, still trying small bits, still looks weird all in all...

>>2930626
I generally plot the idea of where I want them to go, depending on who is doing what in the picture. might have an idea of how I want the interaction to look depending on the piece, though I'm perhaps not the greatest. I've just kinda gone to imagining the scene in whole regardless of angle, in a way.

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>>2930465
Pretty cool. Keep studying the fundies.
It's a bit odd that his pelvis is wider than hers tho.

>>2930630
Interesting, gonna try it, thanks.

Also, your drawing has a really nice gesture and sense of weight. You could benefit from designing your anatomy a bit better (form and shape) and facial studies - Loomis, Hampton, the Reilly method.
Cheers.

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test

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>>2931577
I made this but I don't really know where to post it since nintendo will probably cut my balls off for it

>>2931579
wherever other than tumblr.
also, you have to be a big name for companies to give a shit about you, so don't worry, you are nobody.

>>2931614
>wherever other than tumblr.
Thank you

I'm a literally who with less than 100 followers and I've already been visited by them, I wouldn't be this paranoid otherwise

>>2931624
just don't let search engines index your blog, mark in nsfw if you're really paranoid. Less visible.

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Is this bad or horrible? I started drawing two weeks ago after a hiatus of 10 years.
It's not a cock, it's an art study, no homo.

>>2928961
What the fuck are you talking about?

>>2928961
Did you reply to the wrong person?

>>2931770
>It's not a cock
>>>>ART STUDY

Okay fag what ever you say

>>2927611
are you trying to replicate doxy?
if so you are failing at it

>>2931774
not my problem if you can't see all this.
>>2931780
nope. chill, dude.

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>>2927885
>>2928687
danke danke for the feedback, much appreciated, tried to work it into the pre-existing sketch, definitely made it better but probably could still use work but i'm trying to avoid endlessly dumping time into pieces in lieu of moving on and carrying what i learned into the next piece, i should probably still move that arm thooooo. still need to work on bed sheet wrinkles but the amount of lines they require makes my mind's desire for as few lines as possible wig out

also trying to nail down a ref for a comic i wanna work on of not-sandy-cheeks but getting stuck on the face so i just left it with a shitty temp one

>>2929243
nope, i barely even go to any other boards lol. it's possible someone took my older sketches and posted them on other sites but i kinda also doubt someone'd do that? i'm not that special hahaha

>>2929587
no clue, to be honest i only drew this cause i had the gamegrums LP of sonic boom on in the background while i was working

>>2929738
i'm trying to visually trick people into thinking the dick looks bigger than it actually is cause proportions. it works on my idiot brain at least.

>>2930096
i only let liquids approved by ben stein near my eyeballs

>>2931836
so i'm succeeding at not ripping off another artist wholesale? that is a very kind and thoughtful compliment anon, thank you very much nwn

>>2932366
That kind of style looks cool in motion. Not so much in porn.

Unless there is a market about spoopy skeletons, no one is going to jack off to that.

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tell me what you think

>>2932457
Cant tell if you are being serious or not

>>2932470
just tell dood good or shit still learning gimp and if bad why its bad

>>2932457
Read sticky and go to beginners thread. Everything about this picture is bad.

>>2932490
this.

>>2932457
her asshole is literally crawling onto her buttcheek

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For those of you seeking advice on how to draw porn, I'll stop by this thread from time to time and offer any tips I have to help you get better.

Just my way of giving back.

>>2932755
blog?
I'm not memeing you, I just want to be sure that you're not /beg/ tier.

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>>2932791
I'm not online anymore so, whatever help I can give like this will have to do I hope. Another example of my work.

>>2932755
>>2932814
Neat. I hope you'll stay here few days.

>>2932755
Pls keep your advice to yourself

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>>2932849
>not knowing that all criticism, even from people who aren't as good as you, can be helpful
>not knowing that stranger with a pair of fresh eyes can spot errors in your work easier than you

>>2932849
>please do not give critique or assistance
>/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2932755
>>2932814
you are pretty much mediocre tier. stiff linework without proper understanding of perspective, which results in flat images without proper depth.
sorry buddy. try again in a few years maybe.

>>2932869
>>2932895
opinions from a scrub is not the same as getting good critique from an advanced artist.
also, he's got a shitty attitude and should probably learn his place.
also, great samefagging.

>>2932918
Oh I see it now - you were just pretending to be retarded the whole time.

It's a shame that I took your bait.

>>2932918
with how hard you're projecting I should point you at a wall and run powerpoints on you

>>2932918
Indeed! And everyone should take your own advice and ignore you.

Advanced or not, criticisms are invaluable assuming you know how to take them.

>>2932755
thank you for being helpful thats what i came here for

>>2932927
wow, you must be at least 16. no way to beat older kids.

>>2932933
it's just his attitude that kills it for me.
he's pretty much mediocre crap, but he acts like some kind of big shot.
fuck that shit.

>>2932966
>thank you for being helpful
>posted 2 of his pics
oh wow. either samefag or retarded.

>>2932845
Thanks, anon. I hope I can serve in any way I can.

>>2932912
>>2932849

For those of you learning how to take a good critique, here are two good examples of what to expect when you showcase your work online, and especially on 4chan— not to mention /ic/.

>stiff linework without proper understanding of perspective, which results in flat images without proper depth.

Post a reference picture about what you're talking about, anon. Thanks.

It also helps toughen your skin when they say things like "mediocre tier", "try again" and "Keep your advice to yourself". I've dealt with replies like these for years, and now you can see for yourself, how to better approach them, rather that bicker back and forth endlessly when you know you're not going to win.

Smile, say thank you for your opinion, as for reference about what they're talking about, learn and move on.

>>2932966
I'm glad to help any way I can. Please feel free to ask anything you need. My knowledge is your knowledge.

>>2932981
>Post a reference picture about what you're talking about, anon. Thanks.
I can post 2 kek
>>2932755
>>2932814
stiff non confident linework. check.
bad anatomy. check.
not being able to draw hands. check.
bad foreshortening. check.
flat as fuck. check.

as I said before. you are in no place to give proper advice about porn, as you yourself don't understand fundamentals. being able to draw animu faces like a copy cat, doesn't make you good at drawing porn. sorry buddy.

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Lets get back on topic instead of arguing boys

>>2933020
>I can post 2, kek
And you do it so eloquently, thank you for that.

>stiff non confident linework. check.
>bad anatomy. check.
>not being able to draw hands. check.
>bad foreshortening. check.
>flat as fuck. check.

So...how do I fix it, question mark.

>as I said before. you are in no place to give proper advice about porn, as you yourself don't understand fundamentals. being able to draw animu faces like a copy cat, doesn't make you good at drawing porn. sorry buddy.

Well, I'm going to have to agree with you on a few points here. I don't think ANYONE could truly give proper advice about porn because well, it's porn. It's not like we're trying to draw the Mona Lisa here, am I right?

Yes, I most certainly could have a better understanding of the fundamentals still, but, without a proper reference picture about what you're talking about, I cant see what YOUR vision of what a good drawing is.

Drawing animu faces like a copy cat doesn't help my case here either, but I'm glad I can. Sure, porn doesn't entail being able to draw pretty faces, but it sure does help to some extent, so I'm not caught up worrying about what face I'm going to draw, when indeed I do, draw porn.

I do have to thank you though, for continuing to be an example of how someone should treat a good critique on their work. I appreciate it anon, thanks again.

You'll still post that reference picture for me, right? Don't let me down, I'm counting on you!

>>2933025
It's not so much an argument, more than it is a disagreement between two rational people. And you're right, we should get back to the topic. Sorry for getting off track, I'm still around if anyone needs any help!

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Thoughts?

>>2933043
Why doesn't she have a face?

>>2933043
It's simple, and it certainly gets the point across. If she's sweating profusely I mean. That's one hell of a workout she had.

It's a little difficult to grasp the emotion of the illustration. She's sweating, but why? Remember that a visual narrative is just as important as a written one.

And I'm sure it's something you can go back and edit this, but the hemline of the shirt is missing just underneath her rib cage. Nothing you can't go back and fix.

Also, take into account that the shirt should be taught against her back, rather than it just hanging like it is, if it's being pulled from the front like that, or else we're to understand that she's wearing a shirt MUCH larger than she is, which is okay, too.

If she's small cupped, then I'd imagine there being some form of nipple showing, unless she's a fuller bust, which would then indicate a REAL stretching of the shirt and her breast...overflowing outward. That wouldn't be possible with a larger shirt, right? It just wouldn't make sense to have the shirt tight in some places, and relaxed in others.

>>2933038
>arguing with a retard
You already lost.

>>2933043
Your lighting is inconsistent: her arm is lit from the lest side, while her breast is lit from the direction where viewer is.
And, unless you're going to draw her face from a profile, ear should be moved more to the left. But I may be wrong, so just check your guidelines.
I think that cast shadow from her hand should follow the curve of her butt a bit more - it shouldn't be a straight line.

>>2933038
I "attacked" you only because of this post
>>2932755
you come across like some kind of jesus of porn. instead of making a freaking entrance like you are some kind of frazetta that will save this thread, just give effin' advice, you pretentious moron.

now about answering your questions. your art is mediocre, but you have some mileage and experience. tho what you lack most is more mileage, as right now your stuff can't be considered appealing. the first image has an appealing face, but just because you copied the style of another artist. the second character you posted has a flat face that is atrocious to look at.
you have to learn what makes female faces appealing. you have to learn how to stylize properly. you have to learn when to stop adding details and give the viewer freedom to finish the strokes. line economy.
and secondly you have to do more construction and anatomy studies as you are winging a lot of areas of the body while not being able to convey proper depth.

tl;dr what you need is more grinding.

>>2933057
>arguing with a retard
>You already lost.
kys, scrub.

>>2933057
>ear should be moved more to the left.
I meant right.
Damn, I should go sleep already.

>>2933057
this is what i wanted thank you

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how about this one

>>2933058
Come on, give me a Elvgren or a Von Lind, a Snyed or a De Berardinis when asking how to draw female faces appealing. Frazetta? Have you seen his faces?

That's a TERRIBLE example of learning to draw appealing female faces. Can we agree on a Mitch Byrd, at least? Hell, even a Frank Cho?

And learning to stylize properly can be just as damaging bad advice when you contradict yourself by telling me to learn the fundamentals. I'm surprised you haven't thrown Loomis at me already.

Line economy? Why on earth would you hold back on adding detail to your work? That's like pretending to eat a hamburger when all you've eaten is a slice of tomato and telling your mind, "Okay mind, we're eating a hamburger. Let's visualize us eating a juicy, well cooked hamburger by just eating this slice of tomato. We can imagine the rest."

I'm sorry, but you preaching fundamental work and then contradicting yourself NOW only shows me that you have NO idea what you're talking about and you're just talking out of your ass just to seem like you're well versed on a subject you yourself, have no practice in.

Maybe you're the one coming off as a Jesus of Replies— though in your defense, Jesus doesn't exist.

No disrespect, but you're the one who shouldn't be giving out any advice. You had me until Frazetta.

Yikes.

>>2932755
Lol you fucking suck

>>2933121
Hi, Alex. :)

>>2933115
the fact that you can point out names of famous artists won't make you good in my eyes. stop trying, scrubby.

I pointed out frazetta as a generally well renown artist. no other motives.

I already told you what about your art needs to be improved and how to improve it. now stop being butthurt (talking about how good you are at handling criticism, ha?), mr big shot advisor.

>>2933082
What part of "read sticky and go to the beginners thread" you don't understand?

>>2933131
it's Aljosa, dick

>>2932755
>>2932814
>>2932981
>>2933038
>>2933115
dunning kruger effect in all its majesty.

>>2933082
Colors make it look like smeared shit

Not a big loss anyway

>>2933153
/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

User-created artwork is submitted for critique, and visual art is discussed. Do not claim authorship of works you did not create.
Only constructive criticism will be accepted. Rude or offensive comments will result in a ban.
Requests for free work of any sort are forbidden.
Don't bring community vendettas onto this board. Singling out individual artists for the purposes of trolling them will not be tolerated. All discussion of artists should pertain directly to their work, and not their personal lives.

heres the sticky ass

>>2933170
>One-Stop Beginners' Guide
this is the part that concerns shit artists like you.

>>2933170
>I can't click on links

>>2932399
>That kind of style looks cool in motion. Not so much in porn.
ah but what if i animated it, checkm8 athetits
but really, don't worry, if you think she's too thin the second part of the comic is stuffing/weightgain cause the theme is "pre-hibernation week"

also i usually do draw much more chunkier characters, i'm just working on expanding my skillset/the bodytypes i can draw, especially since it can help emphasize size difference

>>2933152
Diane? Is that you?

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>>2933174
so you want to see shit like this

That's not possible. Why?

>>2933218
fuck yes, these faggots love shit like this >>2933158
>>2933152

See, the problem with trying to analytically break down porn drawings is that the effect isn't analytical at all

if you look at it and it gives you a boner, mission accomplished

but that depends in the purpose

are you trying to draw a dirty picture or be a fine artist?

>>2933211
Fuck you Larry, what the hell are you doing here?

>>2933221
dirty dirty pics

I need some of that poon. post tits or gtfo

>>2933219
whats not possible?

Fuck yeah, cookies. Now that's what I'm talking about.

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>>2933227
tits

>>2933228
The Rolos I ate right now. They've gotten smaller, haven't they? That's a bunch of shit.

>>2933231
Mmmm. fuck yeah, give me some of that. more, give me more.

Cream of chicken kicks ass. Thoughts?

>>2933232
ohhh you could try m&ms

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>well if it isn't my waifu, Redline McMeg
>with a leg for an arm and an arm for a leg

>>2933235
I'm down with it, but only in small doses. Now cream of mushroom, there's your art nouveau.

>>2933242
with ?

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>>2933234
sorry butter face

>>2933236
Yeah, but I'm already at home...my shoes are off. Fuck man, why did I get Rolos?

>>2933245
Have you tried with noodles?

>>2933248
T H I C C. Love it.

>>2933253
egg or ramen

>>2933255
ty

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Hey, when you draw porn, what artists do you guys copy from? I'm partial to hentai artists myself. Thoughts?

>>2933256
I can go either way. But can you put egg in cream of mushroom?

>>2933264
good call

any tutorials on how to draw big veiny dicks?

>>2933271
I'll dump what I have.

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>>2933273

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>>2933274

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>>2933275

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>>2933277

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>>2933278

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>>2933279

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>>2933280

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>>2933281

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>>2933282

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>>2933283

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>>2933284

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>>2933285

>>2933281
these are good dood

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>>2933286

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>>2933287
Just trying to make up for the shenanigans earlier about my work.

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>>2933289

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>>2933290

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>>2933291

>>2933290
its all helpful dood

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>>2933293

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>>2933295

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>>2933296

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>>2933297

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>>2933299

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>>2933300
Check 'em.

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>>2933301

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>>2933302

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>>2933304

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>>2933305

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>>2933306

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>>2933307

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>>2933308

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>>2933309

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>>2933310

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>>2933312

>>2933310
you good have filled my ref folder

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>>2933313

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>>2933315

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>>2933316

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>>2933317

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>>2933318

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>>2933319

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>>2933320

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>>2933321

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>>2933322

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>>2933324

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>>2933325

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>>2933327

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>>2933329

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>>2933330

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>>2933331

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>>2933332

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>>2933333
Bam. Quints. Check 'em.

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>>2933334

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>>2933335

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>>2933336

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>>2933337

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>>2933338

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>>2933340

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>>2933341

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>>2933342

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>>2933343
Last one. hope this helps those who need it. My knowledge is your knowledge now. Good luck in your porn arts.

>>2933082
Why is there a hole where her vagina should be

>>2933274
holy fuck, AMAZING ref dump! thanks!

>>2933301
Just what I was looking for, thanks anon.

>>2933295
Fuck yessss, time to go draw some convincing jizz. thanks, anon.

>>2933291
I've been looking for a SAI cum tutorial for a while, awesome!

>>2933321
>kek on O.

>>2933335
Damn, I can barely read it, but this is going to help a lot...

>>2933309
>>2933310
about damn time, hands.

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im useing irefs and i want to see how this looks

>>2933464
Show us the ref pic real quick. we can give you better 'tiques with it. Not being a fag like other homos on here, i legit want to help

>>2933469
my bad dood i thought this up

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so im doing thecolors i hpoe this looks good

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doing the shading

>>2932755
Guy offers to help others improve, gets attacked. Classic /ic/.

>>2933635
Could you please start using a name?
Since you're not going to listen to advice you get, I want to filter you out.

>>2933221
I'm trying to be both. I try to draw quality porn, not just fap material.

>>2933262
hey edgelord, are you trying to get banned posting children?

>>2933218
>>2933231
>>2933248
>>2933464
>>2933536
>>2933635
get your asses in the beginners thread.

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how does this look?
Is it attractive?

I'm super bad at judging my work so asking here for once.

(also, looking at this thread, is no one else drawing with a pencil these days?)

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>>2933635
You would do better if you had some reference material to base your drawing off of. Visit vipersets.net. There you'll find an ass load of reference material for you to use, study from, and for those of you starting off, something for you to copy to get a better hold on your work.

You don't have to download every set of pictures, just browse the categories, take a look at something you like and download the picture individually.

You still need a lot of work, but that comes with practice. You'll get better if you use a reference picture, rather than trying to draw from your imagination right now, which had no idea what a body looks like.

I found this similar pose on /s/. You can find reference pics just about anywhere.

>>2933888
Are you asking for a legit critique, or are you looking for someone to tear you a new asshole?

I'm the former, is all.

>>2933888
The pose seems kind of unnatural unless they're sitting on a couch or something.

>>2933888

Isn't her right leg in a bit of an awkward position?

>>2933911
is it the girl's right leg? Now that I look at it again I can see it probably feels detached or something. I gotta work on that.

>>2933919
It's the way they're both facing the viewer for no reason.

>>2933892
When you download pictures from vipersets individually (and not from a bulk download like Keep2Share and Rapidgator), you'll be taken to a page with a button that says "Continue To Image".

Left click on THAT button so that you don't get the pop ups. The image will display afterwards, just a heads up for those of you who need it.

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>>2933888
holy shit

Publish it my dude.

Is shitty, but shitty in a strange and fascinating way.

I'm in awe.

>>2933888
beginners thread

>>2933888
it looks incredibly painful (and yes im a big guy)

>>2934027
>>2934039
>>2933994

why is this place full of memelor-
>porn thread

oh.

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is it bad to use design doll for commission/fun ref? i've spent the last six hours fucking around with it and am considering buying a license.

>>2934155

You will often end up with rigid and lifeless poses.

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What you think? I like this kind of stuff.

(Sorry for post this in Alternative Art, my mistake)

>>2934176
the idea is good but its poorly executed and looks stiff to me for some reason. i can see what you are getting at though.

>>2934224
Thanks for the advice. I'll try more curved lines.

>>2934235
one more thing the girls boobs look like they defy gravity, and i dont think you are showing enough of her forms.

>>2934155
r/ing the doxy tutorial

>>2934239
True! I forgot the nipples!, fortunately it's a sketch, I can fix that before the color

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>>2934155
How the fuck do you make a male model without making him look like a fucking blowup doll

>>2933892
ty will do i was just going over one of the ref page anon left no more till i do
>>2933777
eat a dick

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still a bit sketchy, so please don't rip me apart.

>>2934459
the only thing that's gonna get torn apart is hanzo's asssssssssssss

one thing i will say tho is this feels very like, network television sex sceney, like there's no actual ass or genitals being shown, just the faces reacting in an intimate way which makes it feel much more romantic than porny. which is fine if that's what you're goin for, but know that you don't have to shy away from showing the dick, it can be both romantic and porn at the same time if you want

>>2934470
Thank you so much man. I'm just getting started to draw porn actually. But you are definitely right. Gotta draw some real dick action soon.

>>2934474
>>2934475
well that one was meant to be a reply to you. sorry lol

>>2934458
>eat a dick
just understand that you are shit, and at the level you are now you can't draw appealing porn.
also, google dunning kruger.

>>2934235
curves won't help the stifness. practicing gesture will.

>>2933777
Obey the trips pls

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critique please

>>2934747
women don't have dicks

>>2934747
Your anatomy's fucked up, girls don't have penises.

>>2934757
>>2934762
Lol look at these fucking faggots. Leave immediately

>>2928523
Good colour choices, everything else can be fixed up with practise.

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Thoughts?

>>2934747
I give those titties... two thumbs down

>>2933888
anatomical problems
the girl's left shoulder doesnt even resemble a shoulder

no human being has toes this small, her right foot is particularly jarring

her right leg is so awkward it actually took me a while to figure out whose leg it was supposed to be (a mysterious hidden third character?)

solid work on the guy

>>2934819
The dick and cum are the best part that might say something about you.

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it feels very wrong and im not sure why

>>2934875
yeah something is really fucked up about the legs, they're tiny

>>2934875
very wonky foreshortening especially at the legs, the lower half of the legs looks really short., find a pic with a similar pose and analyze it. also needs better anatomy.

>>2934875
also the legs over all are short. check out proportions the one on our right especially.

>>2929821
>can you spread your liitle legs for me honey??

did you think I wouldn't notice this you fuck

>>2934881
>881▶
>>>2934875 (You)
>yeah something is really fucked up about the legs, they're tiny
>>2934882
>>2934883
oh yeah, i see it now, now it keeps fucking me up every time i see it

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why did i spend 1h30 on this?

I don't even know what to do with it, I'll probably just throw it out

Maybe at least I can get some critique out of it...

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>>2934944
>drawing porn in a fucking sketchbook when your parents can barge into your room at any time on any day and find out all about your fetishes

>>2934959
lol. I live alone. In my experience none of my stuff stays private forever and I feel embarrassed in advance for when someone will come across it. In essence, you're right

>>2934722
>Obey common sense pls
fixed that for you

>>2934875
you are pretty much shit at fundamentals. that's what's wrong.

>>2934959
this board is for adults. gtfo.

>>2934976
obey dubs

>>2934959
>parents barging into your room
Are you 6?

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mouth feels weird

Fuck this thread. Start the auto sage, immediately. The cancer must be killed.

Thread's full of neckbeards and faggots, anyway. No wonder BBC-Chan took off.

>>2928687
Best fucking piece out of all the thread. Niggers in here love dat Sanik dik.

a

b

c

d

e

>>2934176
Her boobs are ballooney, face a bit retarded and the mech has some parts mirrored incorrectly, but I could fap to it.

>>2934747
Put a new layer over it and draw the pelvis. If his dick attaches to his belly button isntead of under the pelvis, you know something's not right.

>>2934823
>those
only 1 dude

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Dat ass