almost finished, is there anything notable?

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>>2926133
>(3.5 MB, 5312x2988)

>>2926161
It's time to upgrade from dial-up, anon.

For something like this to work the best that it can, the perspective needs to be consistent. Unfortunately, that just isn't the case.

In the bottom half, the gradating density of lines (dots on lawns, the waves in the water, etc.) - these all give the impression that the first half before the wall has a different perspective than the top half.

>>2926185
Many people browse on phones, where this could be an issue.

Looks like your average "an accumulation of the downtime I had at work feat. a byro" starring literally any middle class 20 year old.

>>2926133
>almost finished

Why post it now instead of finishing it and posting the finished work?

>>2926133

1. Post finished work, eternal "wip" is almost a meme (actually not almost, see merc_wip.jpg)

2. I can't see the drawing through the random shit laying on it + the flare in left corner

3a. It reads like shit, you failed spectacularly in creating any sort of depth

3b. You aren't conistent in your projection, lines aren't parallel and angles don't match even though you obviously used a ruler

4. You were just doodling around and avoiding getting a job today, weren't you

Verdict: Get a real job, stop going to /ic/.

this is trippy af

I think people are mad because you made something that could sell or get you work. People like this kind of design.

There is much room for improvement, but keep doing your thing.

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>>2926133
The trees are cute.

>>2926133
Yes, it looks like an old Japanese map. You should be proud!