What do you think of my comic?

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it's not yours

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Doesn't mke sense. Dude can obliterate solar systensin an instant. How the hell did either of them get to move? They told the god or whatever that they wanted to die. Why wouldn't the god just kill them instantly? This, mind you, is after they pissed him of and then started fighting. Doesn't make sense.

>>2915484
Thanks for the feedback.

Even though Astral is insanely strong, together Lyrie and Obsidius are even stronger.
I wanted to emphasize the fact to the reader

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>>2915496

>Just....

Nothing in that comic gave off that vibe in the slightest. It feels like you are trying to emulate some kind of edgy goofy Anime action sequences and it just comes off as rather cringey. Unless that's the whole jist of the comic.

Btw, is your username "bones" by chance?

>>2915470
>TFS reference

Are you fucking serious?

Super duper fucking cringe.

Apply yourself in both your art and take a course in writing or something, your style reeks of the worst type of fanfiction.

>>2915917
>goofy

eh, rip patrice