Just critique it all you wish!
why make your own thread when there are designated areas to ask for critique
I'd probably masturbate to it in a pinch
facial features look misplaced and disproportionate, especialle the eyes and eyebrows, which, by the way, look like worms.
the rendering is muddy.
boobs (?) are fucking confusing, with that cloth especially. one could also interpret them as her shoulders, so having the actual shoulders peek out behind or otherwise making it look more clear would be good. they also look like balloons.
that thigh band should be way more curved to show the form of the leg.
that top right bump on her hait outline looks out of place.
composition is weird. it's just a speech bubble and single figure, but could be placed better.
I have no idea what's going on with her right leg. is it a stump? and what is that behind her left thigh? her foot?
that's all for now.