Critique on her technique. What can she do better?

>>2908131
more loomis

It's already a masterpiece, no way to improve it

>>2908131
She could learn to lay down paint properly, for starters. I know this is just a meme post but amateur brush handling always autistically infuriates me. Probably because I struggled with it for a while and it always brought that impression of amateur-ness.

>>2908131
i nees her to hug me better ;_;

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>>2908131
BRUSHES LEFT TIP DOWN IN WATER