<<buyin intuos draw
<<trying it for the first time
<<taking about 30 mins to get used to it,then start drawing (time aprox 10 mins)
critique? Don't make your own thread
The car's left pillar is too angled. You need to take into account the angle of the side windows when placing the pillar.
"Draw! Cars" by Doug DuBosque is an old book but it's the best I've seen for learning to draw cars. He uses boxes to guide where lines should be. Check it out!