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been drawing one every day, what ya think?

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All critiques welcome as I'm trying to get better
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i will bump this famb
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Im gonna kill myself
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>>2872182
Just post in the draw thread.
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This is Mike please stop stealing my art and pretending to be me. You are trying to garner more hatred against me by making it seem like I'm posting a bunch of these threads but I'm not.

(The original drawing, as proof that isn't me)
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ya know what, since someone else started it, i guess ill use it.

let me know what you guys think?

all crits welcome
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Do us all a favor and kill yourself. Your art isn't even worth stealing you dunning kruger victim
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Holy shit, stop making your own threads
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>>2872358
we warned you to stop spamming with trip threads and post in the generals, but nooo, you had to be a full fledged dunning kruger.
now you have it.
beg some more, retard.
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>>2872468
I haven't been following this situation at all, but what exactly did the guy do that would be considered "spamming"? I only remember seeing the same thread for like 3 months, so I assume he's been sticking to his thread, posting his drawings every day. Isn't that a perfectly legitimate reason to make your own thread and keep it all contained in it? I mean, If he had been posting a new drawing in the draw thread every day, I would have been far more bothered by it.
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HOLY SHIT, maldraw thread was deleted, maybe mods will clear all this shit up now??
>>2872488
How bout 4 threads in a week
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>>2872488
>I haven't been following this situation at all
Then BTFO and stop defending him
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Im gonna fap on this.
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>>2872182
>All critiques welcome as I'm trying to get better
Oh no you're not.
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>>2872182
Just report and sage the thread. Supposedly, if a thread gets 10 reports, it will autosage. I've already done my job, so at least nine more to go.
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>>2872468
YOU realize by stealing and posting his shit youe just making him stay around longer.... gawd you're an idiot, we want him fucking gone. Not a new thread meming him every 2 days
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>>2872358
Just keep drawing big Mike, fuck the haters my man they're just jealous butthurt losers lmoa
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>>2872793
Nice try, Mike.
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>>2872371
apparently it was by the OP so there is that evidence

>>2872427
didnt make this one ,but i plan to use it

>>2872468
thats too bad cause i love all you guys

>>2872488
im sure these guys will explain it far better than i can. all ive been doing is drawing

>>2872490
yea all troll threads, none were me

>>2872498
hope you enjoy yourself

>>2872510
sorry to hear that

>>2872514
yep

>>2872793
exactly lol

>>2872804
ummm thanks lol

>>2873100
ummm sure man, sure...
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>>2872182
shit

>>2872358
shit

>>2872360
shit

>>2873624
shit
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>>2872360
>>2873624
Good stuff as usual Mike keep it up man.
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>>2873624
Not your blog
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Keep it up mike ic god
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Fuck me in ass
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Vry goodd u kno u r good wen have lot of h8ters
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>>2873624
>ummm sure man, sure...
You're the only one on /ic/ that types like that Mike. Lowercase, ellipsis, "gawd." It's all too recognizable.
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>>2873678
im sorry you feel that way, care to explain why?

>>2874008
thank you very much

>>2874051
didnt say it was

>>2874054
thanks

>>2874124
ummm sure

>>2874131
i guess man

>>2874208
gawd... I cant belive this gawd, ya dun caught mey

GAWD...
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>>2873624
This shits so not scary. How does he think its scary??
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>>2874833
you really improved with this one mike!! i wish that i could draw as good as you, really. better work on my fundementals, ya know what im sayin?
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>>2874942
>ya
Fuck off op
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>>2874934
no worries, im not really going for scary as much as i am interesting creature designs

>>2874942
thanks man

>>2874993
not me, but good try i guess lol
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>>2875970
This is a bit weaker than your usual stuff, Mike. I feel like the conceptual potential is there but the execution just could have been better. One thing to keep in mind is feminine proportions too, she's a bit top heavy with a shoulder to waist ratio more like a man-bot than a femme-bot.
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>>2877009
hmmmm that makes sense, i was trying to capture the idea of a skeleton in a machine, but i see where the idea did'nt really catch, so you think maybe thinning out the character a bit would have helped?
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>>2877136
Draw a giant turd next to his ass lmao
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>>2877136
I'm not sure what it is man. Yeah if the idea was a skeleton in a machine I don't think it reads terribly well. Not enough of the skeleton is showing nor is it detailed enough to really articulate that it's a skeleton, and in the case of the most prominent portion of the skeleton showing in the neck and spine it doesn't really look anatomically correct enough-it really just looks like weird wires or something. Ah well!

>>2877136
I like this one
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>>2877147
lol ill have to remmber that for next time

>>2877149
that makes sense, ill try to do better with an upcoming similar design, also thanks for the compliment. Seems like i just really have t o figure what my concept is gonna be and really drive it home.
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>>2872182
>Gives permission to critique
>On artwork/critique
Well thank you
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>>2880642
any advice would be greatly appreciated
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>>2881013
has no torso.
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>>2886336
got yea, i was trying to make it look likeshe is very short, her bust was very large, and was covering, do you think maybe lengthening out the torso would help ?
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>>2882294
The golem's figure seems flat due to the lack of indication of depth
>>2883464
Looks like the right leg is bent outward at the knee, in other words: broken
>>2884920
Smidge off balance
>>2886333
Hot
>>2887437
Facial proportions seems wrong but I can't say for sure what with the hairline being out of sight
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>>2888281
hmmm that makes sense maybe adding more sadows would help


got yea, i see that thanks


where is it off balance if you mind me asking i dont see it, that would really help me out.


lol

hmmm unfortunately i dont see it on this one, what do you think it might be?
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>>2890837
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>>2890847
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>>2890837
lul
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>>2890847
lel
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>>2890850
>>2890852

HAHA oh man, i really messed up those bad, i cant believe i messed those, thanks for taking the time to point them out. did you notice anything else wrong? it would really help me out
:)
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blog?
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>>2892153
This thread is his blog.
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>>2889167
I didn't realize this thread was still up, delayed response.
>>2884920
The balance issue mainly comes from the lack of any clear root to the ground in either foot, it's almost like it was caught mid stride but the body doesn't indicate this.
>>2887437
This is probably my pickiness of facial proportions, but the eyebrows are supposed to be the middle, yet they're far above the middle even if you count the peak of the hair as the cranium... Thinking about it suppose it is correct, and simply a matter of perspective and a tilted head.
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>>2892153
no i do not want to advertise, im only here to get better

>>2892330
no not really but okay

>>2893021
no worries, thank you ill be taking this advice going forward, thanks again man it has really helped
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>>2872182
tasteless
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