sventastic
>>2870524
kinda stiff for an araki pose
>>2872462
and forced and unfunny
>>2870524
Focus more on the linework before you start adding colours.
>>2872462
Something I've been wondering, best ways to take care of stiffness in figures and poses? (practicing gestures?) A lot of my stuff tends to come out feeling flat like this.
>>2873807
Try drawing the line of action first and building the figure around it. Gesture practice helps. Also I recommend you read the "force:dynamic life drawing for animators" book.