Graf beginner using brush and acrylics. Looking for criticism.

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>>2857094

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>>2857094
I fucked up :/

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better than me kek

>>2857094

Looks like big piece of shit made by braindead bored teen.

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>>2857096

but then again my focus is different from yours

do more sketchbook work, then go to the wall once your randomness starts warping into one clear subject, then i repeat, then and only then, go back to the walls.

i dont know what that place that is but walls are not your sketchbook.

get good at getting what is in your sketchbooks as close as you can to what you tag.

and do more scrawl, stickers, tags, in addition to the fancy street art. gotta appreciate the culture you are attempting to enter whether you like it or not. nobody likes scrawl only, but nobody likes only finesse in their street art. like break the law mane in all the shapes you can.