web comics.

>>2855437
If pic related is your work, I'd postpone it desu.
Maybe do comic strips, write your ideas down and in the meantime, learn your fundamentals.
It would be a shame to pair up lots of time and a good idea with shitty execution.

Mainly composition - both inside and outside the panels. Perspective, character and environment design, shape design, values... The more, the better. Read good comics and watch good movies and don't just consume them, analyze them - how does the director introduce me to the new scene? How did they make this character feel so intimidating, is it the camera movement? etc.

Check out Every frame a painting and Now you see it on yt, they'll teach you all the gimmicks of storytelling in movie (or comics).

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>>2855444
yaeh it would be shame to wast a good idea on crap presentation. do you know of any you tube video tutorials about composition in comics? also yes my work, here is another..

>>2856436
>>2855437
sticky

>>2856436
>>2855437
Fine, I'll be the one, your art is shit, and you're far from producing anything remotely good.
Which doesn't mean your webcomic is going to fail, there are great succesful comics with shit art.
If you want art tips, you're in the right place, read the sticky, learn fundamentals and you'll get better.
If you want comic tips, go to /co/ they have a webcomic thread with much more information that /ic/ will ever give you.

>>2855437
>>2856436
Are you using like Paint Tool Sai to make a comic or something?

You look kind of like you know perspective and form but you're way too chicken scratchy. Either your tool is bad (IE program/tool within program) or you've never used a tablet before ever.

>>2856477
It obviously looks like a custom brush, either that or colossal levels of autism

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>>2856457
thanks
>>2856477
im using sketch book pro and these are more or less quickly done sketch comics and also i have no desk to draw on so i put my tablit in my lap...
>>2856481
maybe a little of both?


here is another page

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>>2855437

Op I recommend you check out the DAILY web comic creation threads on /co/.

some links from the thread sticky~

Here’s a short list of sites that any new webcomic artist or writer will find handy:

>*-Struggling to find that perfect FONT? Create your own using this link;
http://www.myscriptfont.com/

>*-Don’t forget to brush up on that ANATOMY:
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
http://www.quickposes.com/pages/timed

>*-What’s a list without some reference STOCK IMAGES?
People: http://senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
Scenery: http://www.shutterstock.com/

>*-Here's a big fat compilation of CHARACTER DESIGN REFERENCE:
http://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/

>*-Finally, here are some links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018
Do’s and Don’ts for starting a site: http://pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV

>*-Here’s the contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#

>*-We also got a SKYPE CHAT room going on,
To join the chat, seek out 'starlinemike' and they'll add you in.

>Wise words from John Cleese:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qby0ed4aVpo

>Invisible Ink:
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf

>Paper Wings
http://chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
https://web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/

>Fonts for your webcomic on Blambot:
http://www.blambot.com/

>Writing Resources:
http://www.cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf

>>2856502
thanks im over on /co/ now i didn't know there was a comic board....

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>>2856457
>art quality doesn't matter
Pic related

>>2856494
Have you installed the tablet driver software?

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>>2856729
yes i have but my tab is only like 5" so its hard to draw on with no desk

>>2856865
>that handwriting
bruh, just use photoshop to put the text in on post processing if you're gonna put it in, that way you only have to worry about providing negative space to put the speech bubbles and text in.