> 3rd-year art major at Pratt Institute in Ny
> Professor assigns us task of drawing an elephant
>Is this good?
>>2855108
Your abstract Jewish elephant seems to be an unusual way to express your inner sexual desire. More original work please.
>>2855108
You forgot the hooves.
>>2855118
How about this?
>>2855128
An interesting expression. Neaten up the hooves and drop the nose hove, however.
>>2855131
Fixed it
>>2855132
What is the story you are trying to tell with this piece? What is the message? What emotion or ideals should be important to the viewer? If I know this, I could give you more precise advice.
>>2855134
What I am trying to tell is my granpa Levi's story of being in a Dachau. He told me the burden of his religion weighed heavily on him so the elephant symbolizes weight.