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Hey, I would like some critique on a few sketches I did. What

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Hey, I would like some critique on a few sketches I did. What went wrong? What went good? I don't really have anyone to ask for a honest and at least a bit educated opinion.

FAQ:
Q: Why is the X colour Y?
A: Because I enjoy using pencil just for basic skeleton and coloured pencil for the rest.
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>>2807549
Okay first, please post in the draw thread, second, you should draw a ground plane for your drawings so they don't look like they're floating in space

Please be gentle with your colour pencil shading because with they way you've done, for example, the bird's talons, it's hard to see the details with the super defined outlines.

Vary your line weight, thicker lines can be used to define objects closer to the viewer while lighter lines define objects further away.

If you don't already, draw your pencil constructions with an H or 2H pencil to keep them very light and to avoid smudging against the colour pencils.

Your drawings otherwise show you have decent observational skills and sense of form but it's far from perfect.
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>>2807574
Thank you, this is helpful, I'll try to apply your tips tomorrow. Sorry about wrong thread, I am kinda new at this board.
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