How would you improve this composition, /ic/?

>>2807334

Some of my own reflections.

I love the shape design and rendering of the main trunk that the kid is standing on. I also like the way the diagonal cuts across the image.

I do feel a bit uneasy about the way it cuts off the left part of the split tree at the top. The shape feels just slightly too small to be cropped because it borders on looking like a tangent.
I would prefer if the shape either did not touch the top border or was thicker so it would feel less like a tangent.

The branch to the right to me almost looks as if it's more stylized than the twisted main trunk shape. It's more flat and graphic, almost fly swatted, and the symmetric nature of how the branches...branch out (sorry) reinforces this graphic effect. I think it would have been a more interesting composition if the branches continued to spiral diagonally into the picture it would make for a more dynamic and powerful composition, rather than just existing out to the right as they do now.

All in all, I love the style/rendering but I just think some part feels a bit incongruous.

>>2807334
Looks fine. i don't like the aspect ratio but that's about it.