comics and shit

>>2793281
are you black?
just curious

>>2793290
......yes ,....why?

>>2793281

shieeeet

>>2793322
whats shit about it ?

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this thread is already gonna be good

>>2793330
well i cant improve if i dont get any idea of how

>>2793281
Okeydoke.
How intact do you want your style to be?
Ass is big but i've seen bigger work in a drawing.. The anatomy is way off though.
Leg anatomy in general needss to become your
new friend.
Your face is bimbo x21 which again can work.
As a man who likes big ass please look at some reference. Google big fat asses. Its literally the most fun you can have doing research.

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>>2793540
Didn't finish the face criticism. You are suffering from a thing called face creep where the face sneaks out and consumes the face. Foreheads are always bigger than you think.
This website will be your friend.


http://babelab.blogspot.co.nz/2011/11/feature-creep-constraining-face.html

>>2793540
thanks im going to finish doing it the way it is now only because im at that point but i start to put down notes on it

>>2793281
flat as fuck. work on your perspective and construction. you are pretty much beginner tier level.

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>>2793281
>>2793290
>>2793306

>>2793544
Making the "constraint" dependent on the eyebrows is just stupid. The surface beneath them is what's important.

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This overpaint might help- you should definitely focus on studying anatomy and female faces.
There are ways to show that a woman is curvy and sensual without comically exaggerating her features.

>>2793840
I dont get it, when i try and shade the anatomy in, it never looks like that there is any.

>>2793842
Show us an example of you 'shading in anatomy'

>>2793290
It's sad when you can tell a black artist just by looking at their drawings.

>>2793842
Lack of milage. Best way to fix that; practice.

>>2793846
he be drawin thic biches

>>2793281
You seem more focused on drawing your kink than actually producing a good drawing.
Take your dick out of the equation and you might improve with time.

>>2793840
hey, that's pretty good

>>2793325
the color

>>2793840
>tfw no vetyr gf to redline your art

>>2794099
<33

>>2793764
i dont get it ?

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>>2793844

>>2793840
thank you this will help a lot

>>2793846
being black matters more to you, than the art, thats why

>>2794451
but it dosen't thats why i dont get it

>>2794422
>>2793842
its because you dont know anatomy or understand how light works. practice figure drawing and study a bit of anatomy, do some still life and observe light on objects. then try again

>>2794455
was that to me or 2793842 or both ?

>>2793764
kek

>>2794451
What ever you say D'Squarius

>>2794504
well i sorry living dood

>>2793281
*breath in*

...

boi

>>2794541
ya know this makes me think your kinda i don't know .... butt hurt bout some down there guy

>>2794547
can we ban niggers from this website lmao

even through the internet im getting triggered i think

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>>2793306
>>2793290
>>2793281

I came here to ask this, you didn't disappoint, /ic/.

>>2794556
neither did you lol

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>>2794547
I'm fine down there my man; I'm just giving you shit. Is this your first day on 4chan? Anyway, as others have said, your stylization choices with regards to the features of the face seem a little severe to the point that they look less sexy and more silly. There are also a few other issues. Look at her calf on our left, it's turned away like 60 degrees from her thigh, that ain't right. Her thigh and leg that's nearer to us is also much longer, you'll have to practice visually measuring that kind of stuff until the point it becomes intuitive.

People are bagging on you because you're black as a cruel joke, but look at the kind of stuff LeSean Thomas and Wesley Louis do. maybe some day you'll be able to do the same. Hell, I think most of us would like to say we could do what they can.

http://leseanthomas.com/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7CVxE-fXCFA

https://www.thelineanimation.com/super-turbo-atomic-ninja-rabbit/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FmkAcGz1BJk

>>2794562
ill keep all that in mind ty ,where you get that gif it looks reapy

i did this while i was reading about how to improve my hero

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>>2794616

>>2794618
here's the original

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>>2794620

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>>2793290
>>2793306
>>2793322

>>2794622
you just traced

>>2796241
anything to improve

>>2796249
stop tracing?

>>2793306
At anotha brotha on /ic/ never thought I'd see the day.
Curious what is your comic about man?
Is it a kink comic?