What do you think of this sketch for a game I'm making?

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>>2787189
Pretty good overall, maybe make the hair look bigger? I mean, make it look like it isn't glued to her skull.

>>2787189
Read the sticky
Loomis
Etc

>>2787189
Don't chickenscratch

is the game called "no fundamentals"

>>2787189
Come back with a full character sheet, meaning more angles, full body images, and variations in attire and hair style and w/e else. By the time you have that, you'll probably more easily notice your mistakes.

I'm working on a quick redline

but honestly OP you're not there

your line work has no variation
proportions, especially of the face are off, she has no jaw
the clothing has no sense of draping

and "Achiko" is not a surname

>>2787189
Its anime. what do u want to hear? every autist can draw shitty anime. god how i hate this chinese bullshit