WIP thread Show me what you're wipping on.

>>2782521
Her tail begin on here buttock. The overall perspective is a bit off, as a result the pose look unatural. She is a fennec but have frog legs. Also beware of tangents, especially on her hand/face

>>2782521

Why is her tail on her left butt cheek

Yeeeee

>>2782572
not op but it's definitely on her sacrum so you're wrong

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>>2782521
I would add more structure to her face. Color choice is nice.

I think it's not yours

>>2782521

My dick

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>>2782551
Changed the perspective, now ut should look less fucked. Her tail is above her buttocks though, and I don't know what you're on about on the frog legs.

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>>2784261
Tell me more about this foxy lady

>>2784261
vlog?

>>2784261
>furry attention whore doesn't understand that anything they're doing is wrong
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooow that's a new one

>>2784272

Not that guy, but no the critique was just wrong at some parts and vague in others. The tail thing is just wrong, it's pretty obviously above her ass. I'm looking at it and also have no idea what the fuck "frog legs" is referring to.

There's nothing bad about looking at critique and disagreeing as long as you don't dismiss it out of hand. If people applied all the critique they got on /ic/ indiscriminately I'd be willing to be it'd be a net downgrade in quality half the time.

>>2782521
here is my WIP

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>>2784279
Sorry, here it is

>>2784261

By frog legs they probably meant the way you're defining and doing the legs looks like they're just tapering on down. It doesn't look like they have much form and you have a bend on the butt that implies that's the cheek location (below the dress). If you got rid of that implication on her ass below there it would probably help overall. If she just has that thick of thighs and big of a butt then make her lower leg muscles thicker in along with it.

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>>2784272
Here's the original sketch, the tail is above the butt.

>>2784285
Make sense.

>>2784290
post your tumblr

>>2784297
this; blog pls

>>2784297
http://echoseed.tumblr.com/

>>2784290

Did you mean to say Makes sense? or make sense? Either way I would say from your sketch the way you're rounding the leg, as if it's going back, the butt cheek would define itself more on one side and less on the other due to the direction of the leg. Also you covered it up with the hair but what is going on with the back, around the teres major/minor?

>>2784310
It makes sense. The left buttock is slightly raised and the left leg is pushing her towards the window. Her right shoulder is lowered and pressing against the window. That's pretty much it.

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Working on a few things.

Here's one.

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>>2784336

two

>>2784337
Fuck that one.

>>2784336
I really love that one tho

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>>2784347

I swear it will interesting by the time I'm done with it, but I'm glad you liked the second one.

This is the third one I'm working on, but I need to adjust the pose. Too symmetrical.

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>>2782521
I'm remaking an old pice from 2014

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Panels and buttons

>>2784261
values are so fucking bad, its pretty much deviant art tier.

>>2784487
Man that's actually really cute and I'm not a furry!

>>2782521
>tfw have to mastrubate mid-way thru my furry WIPs so I can never finish them
shit feel desu

>>2784487
Very cute

>>2784486
Keep going dude

>>2784487
make the ears bigger. the ear to head ratio of the old pic is way cuter.

>>2784487
nice, blog?

>>2784487
super cute dude

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>>2784261
prosthetic limb? cyborg? robot?

>>2784261

Why is her tail attached to her L5 vertebra?

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>>2784518
Better?

>>2784763
Cyborg. Was thinking of Blade Runner and GitS when making it.

>>2784791
if the main light source is from the window, the highlights on the ponytail makes no sense at all. the tail can be less lit because it should be more in the shadow.

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>>2784261

Seriously, tails do not work that way. You and every other artist that thinks a tail grows out of the root of the spine need to learn some fucking skeletal anatomy.

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>>2784290
>>2784791
How has anyone not commented on this?
The bottom of the left butt cheek should follow the curve of the cylinder of the leg, since it's coming backwards.

Sorry for the shitty fix but it was done on a laptop touchpad

>>2784939
because it's a shitty furry symbol drawing

>>2782595
Really nice for a furry. Flog?

>>2784962
>le armchair shittalker
why didn't you redline it then

>>2784806

Well anon those artist who draw like that are either drawing real animals or people who are trying for ultra realism of something not real.

Above the correct area is more pleasing too look at.

Much like no one wants to see giant fat ass cellulite all over a characters drawn ass. Some like maybe 1% might like that but most of us would prefer a pleasing not some common real life ass to stare at.

Not sure why this is so hard for people to understand.

>>2784979
because the artist is a hopelessly ignorant fuck that

a) isn't worth the time to try help

b) has shown themselves to ignore the people trying to give them advice in this very thread

please see

>>2784980
>>2784290
>>2784323

and then fuck off, I've got an armchair to keep warm

>>2784806
Would look weird as shit if it came out from between the buttcheeks.

>>2784806
>>2784939
>>2784800
Thanks for the tips guys, will improve upon it for my next drawing.

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>>2784791
Rendering is fun and all, but you should catch up on your fundies.
A bit of drawabox and a few chapters of Scott Robertson's How to draw will get your visualisation up and running.

>>2785091
You honestly have not done shit.

>>2785091
You didn't line up anything correctly or make it them the correct size, nice try though lmoa

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>>2785104
>>2785105

>>2784970
I deserve a flogging, yes. No I have nothing, just deleted my tumblr in fact. Thanks btw.

>>2785025
It wouldn't come out from between the cheeks, you realize you can feel the bone on yourself right? It's just at the point where the buttocks begin to separate, whereas the image has it a few inches above that. The origin of the tail looks too far to the left in the finished picture as well

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making my way through this one. the apples came out so good T_T

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Have yet to render the right bottom side of the picture, and the arm. Don't like how the legs of the blue one are looking, I feel like there's something wrong with it and the knees.

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gay shit.

>>2785476
what art books do you study from bri bri

how do I furry

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>>2785561
>Those hips

>>2785609
never really studied an art book. i did a few bargue plates and have been meaning to get back to them im just not sure how much they help. they're pretty when I'm done but idk if they actually make me any better

>>2785606
Is thist Ilima?

>>2784522 >>2784670 >>2784702 >>2784760
Thanks guys :)
>>2784750
I have a DA http://unnamedpro.deviantart.com/

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more pompadour gorilla

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>>2785710
yes, from pokemon sun/moon

>>2785025

That's because the buttcheeks are drawn badly too.

>>2785561
thicc
though it's a bit odd that not a single lower leg is visible. Soraka's lower half does seem off as well

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>>2785476
i like it

but id leave it at this point, add some more pencil and bg. Those deformed cut-out apples look cool.

rest is furry or anime infested. ugh.

Crit please;

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this lucio and

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>>2786603
and i need to get back to this too

>>2786604
Did you use a ref?

>>2787091
No ref was used. Just trying to pick colors that work

>>2787120
Its looking gud to me, I like the reflection

>>2786604
I don't see why the yellow light would be so constrained.
I feel the greys in the sky should be more brownish in any case.

>>2786604
Strong and nice choice of light, that's cool. Have a look at some paintings by Turner.

>>2787567
thanks mate.
>>2787573
its a wip so far. i plan to spread the colors in the sky out more.
>>2787585
i'll take a look when i can. thanks man.

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workin on a vamp character + catalyst, might throw in some buff items

>>2788025
superb

>>2785476
dude evrythings the wrong shape lmao

>>2785652
do normal of first of both and when your good stick the head from one on the shoulders of the other