Critiques? I make this kind of thing with sharpies all the time.

bretty good b8

Never have I seen such a waste of time and ink.

Most shapes are of the same size (big no-no), colors too strong, choose 1 or 2 more pigmented and make the rest more dull/grey (ik you're using sharpies but they limit your range of colors that you can use)
The composition doesn't tell me anything either, choose 1 or 2 point of interest and work with that
Try working with organic shapes inspired by nature (eg. feathers, sea shells, tree roots)
You have a lot to learn, good luck! c:

>>2772819
Cool. Progress however you want to progress from here. Maybe try doing fractals like this. Or different media.

It's bad. Fuck you.

>>2773075
Largely shit advice, ignore

>>2772819
Don't waste your money like that lmao

not bad

is this seriously a fucking thread

>>2772819
It's okay, now try drawing on a white paper while you're not in class. It will make you put more soul in it and you will have better result.
Don't listen /ic/ for technique advice btw, except if you want to do art that looks like everyone else.

if I had the choice to rid the earth of either anime or abstract art, I'd choose the latter.