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Gonna be posting Comic Pages and asking for help / advice as I work on this. First few are done. I'd like to hear some Critiques to improve and better execute further pages as I work. Will be posting wips as well
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> Page 7
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>chink
>chink
>chink

>blackwood academy
>black wood

>darkie is picked on by white kids

>do you miss your garbage can

>calling the darkie a raccoon
>coon

10/10 very subtle
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I thought this was gonna be another "ic makes a comic thread" but starting off with a premade tumblr trash comic

then I read op and got sad
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>>2762034
Step one:
Learn to draw
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>>2762041
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>>2762106
same. That thread was fun.
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>>2762126
>you
>white text
you had one job, anon
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>>2762138
>you had one job
Not a job if I don't get paid. Greentext is unlocked if you support me on my patreon.
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>>2762126
OP here.
This legitimately made me laugh. Thanks anon.

>>2762096
It seems you picked up on a semblance of humor that actually wasn't aimed for. I'm glad you pointed this out but I'm not really sure how to 'fix this'. I was honestly just designing lil brats with no real intent for specific races in mind.

>>2762106
I'm considering asking ic to help me make this better. I have a good rough draft in mind and that's what this go around is. A rough draft for practice and trying to feel out and settle son a specific way of drawing the characters presented.

I'm currently having trouble coming up with dialog for page 3.

Between pages 1 and two a switched the fencing from a messy cross hatch to a pattern. I'm surprised no one caught the spelling errors yet.
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