Gonna be posting Comic Pages and asking for help / advice as I work on this. First few are done. I'd like to hear some Critiques to improve and better execute further pages as I work. Will be posting wips as well
>Page 1
>Page 2
>Page 3 Wip
>Page 4 Wip
> Page 7
>Page 8
>chink
>chink
>chink
>blackwood academy
>black wood
>darkie is picked on by white kids
>do you miss your garbage can
>calling the darkie a raccoon
>coon
10/10 very subtle
I thought this was gonna be another "ic makes a comic thread" but starting off with a premade tumblr trash comic
then I read op and got sad
>>2762034
Step one:
Learn to draw
>>2762041
>>2762106
same. That thread was fun.
>>2762126
>you
>white text
you had one job, anon
>>2762138
>you had one job
Not a job if I don't get paid. Greentext is unlocked if you support me on my patreon.
>>2762126
OP here.
This legitimately made me laugh. Thanks anon.
>>2762096
It seems you picked up on a semblance of humor that actually wasn't aimed for. I'm glad you pointed this out but I'm not really sure how to 'fix this'. I was honestly just designing lil brats with no real intent for specific races in mind.
>>2762106
I'm considering asking ic to help me make this better. I have a good rough draft in mind and that's what this go around is. A rough draft for practice and trying to feel out and settle son a specific way of drawing the characters presented.
I'm currently having trouble coming up with dialog for page 3.
Between pages 1 and two a switched the fencing from a messy cross hatch to a pattern. I'm surprised no one caught the spelling errors yet.