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Pls critique

Don't go on about the leg, I know I messed it up
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Almost everything is severely fucked here. You need to draw from life / pictures for about a year, studying the anatomy and proportions. It's clear you're a beginner and know next to nothing.

Do not be dismayed; it can all be learned with a few hundred hours behind you.
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>>2757595
Thank you kind Anon
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>>2757596
I just realized that this could have come off as rude; I admit I can be a little crude around the corners. The reason you brought it here is to have certain things pointed out, but the truth is that you know very little - but that's to be expected of any one who has never actually studied. And knowing how to study instead of copying is important.

As you study, do not just copy. Notice how the limbs move. Study center lines and where they go to. Break your anatomy down into 3 dimensional objects nad make sure you have center lines for EVERY side of that form. For the thigh, you have the front/top, the in-side, the out-side, and the back/bottom. All of these have a center line. And those center lines will tell you where the knee cap is. They'll also tell you where the calf meets. That center line can shift at the foot because of the ankle, but the top of the foot has the same center line.

Study your proportions; people have different proportions. Do not just assume the 7 / 8 head rules. People have different lengths of the body, they have different lengths of the torso. They have different sized gaps between the ribs and the pelvis. Some people have narrow shoulders, which start practically at the sides of the head - others have broad shoulders.

Learn how the arm pit is just the lats and the pectorals and an arm is literally held on only be muscle and a few small bones. Study how the shoulders rotate and what they do - and WHY they rotate how they do. Study the forearm (you'll likely need an actual anatomy book for this one). Learn how to break complex shapes into simple forms - for instance, the torso can be a box, an egg, or even a cylinder. These are the "studies," not simply replication of the image or person.
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Not bad Anon, strife for a well drawn human body and you may get it.
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>>2757595
the hero /ic/ needs
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