What do you think?

>>2756414
If it were a school project it would be surprisingly well done, but I think you have higher standards than that. I think it looked okay. Keep going

Also, remove that "thanks for watching" screen at the end.

>>2756424
Thank you so much! :)

>>2756414
You have the spark but you dress like a fag

>>2756414
lol

easily the gayest thing I've seen this week

>>2756414
>bowtie
Ugh. Seriously, you look like a faggot.

>>2756463
>>2756462
>>2756450

Thank you guys but no need to be rude! ^^

>>2756414
You need to present yourself way more egotistically if you ever want to make it big on youtube.

>>2756450
>You have the spark
is this is the first recorded physical appearance of the spark?

could you fry up somebody with it? is palpatine the best artists ever born?

>>2756859
>>2756887
But that's not how I am. I'd rather be true to my viewers who I keep dearly rather than make it big and become a paper cut-out Youtuber!

But thanks for tips anywho! I'll do my very best! :)

>>2756957
You're too pure for this place my friend

>>2756414

It's kinda fun to watch. The shaky camera actually makes it more interesting. The lighting would look more realistic if you softened the "core" of the lighting bolts just a tiny bit. Maybe if it's possible to add some kind of subtle grain or texture it would blend in more. Right now it doesn't really blend in much.

>>2756414
Why are you posting other people's autistic videos on /ic/ ?

Ah nice!! Yeah I should try that out! ^^ Thank you so much for that! :D