Critique or advice wanted!

>>2745783
blog? :3

>>2745784
I do not have a direct blog but I can upload stuff to my site after work. I do not have anything recent on it right now.

kikagaro dot com

Ill work on getting my recent things up on it.

>>2745792
Im pretty sure he wasn't serious.

>>2745799
Does not matter to me, they asked so I provided.
Some recent stuff is uploaded.

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>>2745802
>they asked so I provided

>>2745805

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>>2745805
derp

>>2745805
What is going on here...

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>>2745816

>>2745783
That's pretty cute.

>>2745783
Go to this thread >ARTBOOK THREAD download some books and study them

>>2745947
Thank you!

>>2746003
Will do thank you!

>>2745783
Neck looks kinda wide and the line work is shitty. But it's still cute! Nice job

>>2745783
any retard can copy a chibi, and you even signed it too

>>2745783
as for the pose it's nothing interesting she is just standing, expression does nothing to help it either. a picture without a story is just a picture.

line work is all over the place, and even though some people will use crossing lines like you did near her feet, id advice against that unless you are really precise and purposeful as to make those lines follow the three dimensional shape of the cloth, and the other lines too. the way you do it kills form.

to get a better line work id advise to learn line precision, as to make lines have same spacing among each other, do not cross accidentally if they are supposed to be parallel.

for pose, just go through gesture drawing books, and draw tons of croquis.
for better crosshatching study people who are better than you, maybe old masters if nothing else in mind. lots of comic artist who do crosshatching do it very similiarly to them.

this was coming from a person who has only been focusing on line drawing and recently focusing on crosshatching mainly. kind of wrote this critique for myself rather than you, i assure you i'm mediocre in drawing.

>>2747270
actually i just seen your blog, you seem to practice line quite much with the design things, you keep doing that your line quality will improve. still, get the purposefulness in your lines when using it for defining shapes.

>>2745792
If you're drawing every day you may as well join LAS (check the catalog for Last Artist Standing)

>>2747272
That image was a from a direct reference, didn't really try to change anything on it. as for the lining, that's why i have been doing the design things, figured it was pry the best way i could go about improving that without just drawing strait lines for pages on end.

>>2747278
I saw that and thought about it but there are several days a month that I go without internet and would not be able to keep it updated.

>>2747539

yup that's it

>>2747541
if you just copy a drawing at least mind the original proportions