How can I improve this logo? Thank you a tonne in advance

Fatter, larger text, smaller star with sharper, thinner edges (try to follow the curve of their center lines, the tail needs more streamline and a key that matches the star. The star centers color dodge hurts to look at, make it one color. When you design a good logo you have to think simpler, clearer, always emphasize the text.

Delete it, study design for a year and then start again from scratch

>>2726301
Try /gd/, no amount of gesture studies prepares you for logo design.

Colour scheme kinda sucks and the intricities don't read, aim for a more silhouette based design and try to incorporate complementary colours for more eye-catching direction or keep it one hue for more of a branding approach.

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>>2726301
I guess this is not that different from composition. Beware of tangents and avoid those cliché early 00's logo designs.

>>2726301
this looks straight outta the early 2000s, you should go with it to be honest kinfolk

>>2726301
Seriously? >>/gd/ is made for this, is full of people who know what they’re doing, and kinda needs content rn. Why do you post this here?