Critique would be appreciated =)

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>>2720117
Ima about to nut to this, hold on senpai

>>2720117
to flat

>>2720117
It looks like you tried your best to photo copy. Try not to get too worked up on detail, and focus on fundamentals.

>>2720117
Just darken the shadows around the creases on the ears and nose. They kind of blend in together making the image flat. From what I can see the ear creases look good, just hard to see. It's got a lot of potential.

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>>2720156
I think her boobs size is fine anon

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>>2720117
Where are the fucking mods for this type of shit

GO TO THE DRAW OR BEGINNER THREAD DIPSHIT


STOP MAKING THREADS FOR YOUR OWN SHITTY "ART" PLEBS

Do some asaro heads. I can tell you're trying to get the values, but you've just ended up with a flat, soupy sort of look. There isn't enough contrast and your edges are non-existent. Everything is way too soft and blended out.

>>2720117

Push your values.

Work on shading.