Old art that I would like to be criticized on, I haven't drawn in a long time and would like to improve
>>2715193
then draw something new
>>2715193
1. Flip it vertically.
2. Make it smaller.
3. Decent for tumblr likes. Do you want to build an art career?
>>2715193
is this a new meme?
>>2715251
Are these threads reportable yet
>>2715193
it looks very mediocre and like something a child would draw. fortunately for you op, i red-lined it and made it less shitty. my problem with your drawing is that it is too stiff and lacks any kind of dynamicism. i would recommend varying the weight of the pen strokes and working with curves in the sketching process, rather than straight lines.
Thank you everyone for all of your critique!
>>2715437
ay this is a terrible redraw that looks fugly so i did a blue line next to the redline because im bored and this meme needs to be continued.
>>2715193
Your drawing *is* to stiff. kinda looks like a sticker but the line consistency could work if you stay loyal to it I know some styles that don't have alot of line-weight and still look good so whatevz. Though i would recommend experimenting with it at the very least. Your perspective & dynamics definitely need some work. that foot up in the air should not be all at the edge like that. Tbh im not much better but u done fucked up son. Also get a feel for the weight of stuff, like the hair swooshie. Altogether though your not a piece of shit so congrats.
can the next memester please use green yes thankyou
>>2715570
we don't have the budget for that many freckles
>>2715193
>>2715437
>>2715570
>>2715644
I think you all did a great job ^^ I'm not much help but the ear is too low there in the original ^^; but keep it up and make sure you learn the basics~
i like where this thread is going
>>2715193
draw something new