Do you like my SLENDER MAN MOVIE?

I'm waiting for your critique

>>2713257
same issues as the last time you posted

to begin with, the source content is stale as month old bread

it's done during the daytime (removes most of the suspense of the original story)
boring shot composition
shitty bloom filters
the cuts with him approaching are very ovious
cheap,
trash costume. nice knitted gloves at 0:57
slender man is told to be a being that stalks you, meaning the awkward full sprint he does while the actor tries not to trip is hilarious
very, very cheap stock scream effect

maybe if you leave for another month and make another thread, people will be more favorable to it then.

Also, to be noted; your original video was much more interesting than this. It seems like you have deeply regressed. Go back to your roots because your framing in the first was better

and last but not least, you would probably be better off posting in /tv/

watch as many psychological horror films as you can and take notes to things like music cues, lighting, and reveals.

sometimes what isn't there is way scarier than what is; that doesn't mean you CAN NOT show the creature/monster, what it means is obscuring them or keeping them shadowed will increase the fear of the audience because it will make them think "Is there really something there? Or am i just seeing things?"

try to film at night if possible, if not then try looking up a tutorial to work with saturation, hue, contrast, color correction, leveling, and curves to make it appear night.