Critique / Thoughts?

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>>2692551
Woopsiedaisy

Your forms feel a bit lumpy. For instance the metal jug thing I would assume in reality is fairly even and symmetrical, but you can see the apex of it's curve falls at a different point on each of its sides in the drawing. Similar point to be made on the... book? brick? in the left hand drawing, the edges feel very wobbly. On that point it's hard to identify what it is. Take into consideration when positioning the objects in the still life what information is present to inform the viewer what a thing is.

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>>2692542
Don't be afraid of using the white of the paper for the highlights

More work on your line art

Other than that keep up the grind.

>>2692542
Since no one else mentioned it, post in the beginner thread. No one on this board is good enough to have their own critique thread, especially not you.

>>2694359
illastrat says Hello

Hey /sug/