I can do better, how tho?

>>2692106
Next time take a photo under better lighting conditions, take it straight on instead of at an angle, crop the picture, resize the image to roughly 600x800, and post in an existing thread like the Draw Thread or Sketchbook Thread instead of making your own.

>>2692114
Thanks, I have never posted before.
Anything on the art or you can't see it?

>>2692117
The drawings look okay. The line quality is kinf od bad though, and it looks like you don't know how to draw heads or hands so are avoiding it. Don't neglect your weaknesses. The drapery isn't well understood either, you should get more reference on it if you don't already, and pay close attention to where it's being pulled tight and where it is slack, and why.

>>2692119
I wasn't avoiding heads, it just wasn't relevant to what I was doing. I tried on the hands, but good to know it wasn't good looking.

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>>2692119
>The drawings look okay

>>2692133
post work

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This photo was taken before you told me how to take pictures, so forgive me.

How does this look tho?

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>>2692134
now you friendo

>>2692137
It's really nice, the eyes are a bit close and the lines or tones, are really heavy on the face on the second one. The first one is fine, I'm guessing it supposed to look like that, if not the body is odd, lol.

Try light Strokes on the second one.

>>2692158
my hand is heavy mang I try to losen up. Makes drawing a lot more difficult but doesnt matter with painting.

>>2692106
>>2692135

honestly though op, drawing is not ok. Foreshortening is decent, but thats about it. I would advise to draw from reference a lot more, since you seem to invent on the fly how the muscles look.

>>2692106
Here's a redline for you
I'm sorry but I'm not very good at drawing hands

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>>2692205

>>2692206
I like it

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>>2692206
Now this is starting to look more like a scene. Like the man behind doesn't want the man in front to leave.
Nice work, anon.

Also, what the fuck is this, OP? A random mechanical hand? I get that some have their own way of constructing anatomy, but don't leave it like this when it's clearly not intended to be a robot hand.

>>2692270
Lmaoooo, I keep saying the hands and was not main focus.