Critique this piece

Can't forgive the picture being sideways

Post it in the beginner thread. Also orient it as you wish your viewer to see it.

>>2686527
You know, a muscle is just a 3D form with certain volume and shape. If you just outline the form instead of bringing it out of the paper, any effort spent on learning the muscles and designing the figure will be wasted. Read Keys to drawing, then Drawabox. Learn to draw the form before designing it.

Another thing - I don't think you have the right perception of what "style" actually is.
You can either learn the rules and then show your style in how you bend them to your advantage, or you don't learn the rules and then style will only be and excuse to hide your mistakes and prevent you from progressing.

>>2686546

>style will only be an excuse to hide your mistakes and prevent you from progressing.

Fucking dose of truth right here

Thanks guys, I'm sorry for being an inconvenience and posting incorrectly. I'll try to better myself.

>>2686527
Your style is pretty spiky, OP. Maybe think of designing your guys to stray away from edges and moreso towards bulk. If you want him to look intimidating, try putting reasons to be intimdated on his armor- either by having it look haggard and used, or with marks of blood and recent use.