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I've been an artist for many years off and on as well as holding a professional career.
I am an old school painter and sculptor.
I've posted this image in a couple of threads relating to art, but never in /ic/
I have been out of the game for awhile and would love some genuine feedback.
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>>2666181
Looks great you are late 30 to early 40?
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>>2666193
39
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>>2666193
I think art is dead and my age group is beginning to realize this
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>>2666196
I knew it! I was hosted at an art gallery about a year ago and after getting into the scene the only people that likes that stuff were those folks. It looks great! I will attach some of my work here shortly
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>>2666196
^ was meant for OP
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>>2666202
Cool brougham!
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>>2666198
No way I'm 22 it's pretty big in my town
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>>2666202
Here is another piece from a while ago
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>>2666202
>>2666193
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>>2666210
Had to post from another device, fuck
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>>2666207
What town?
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>>2666202
>>2666193
>>2666211
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I'd love to stare at this work intensely whilst experiencing the effects of LSD. It also looks great on its own.
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>>2666220
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>>2666223
Man you have some Beetlejuice shit going on are you tripping now?
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>>2666213
San Antonio tx>>2666229
Lol no not tripping I love the compliment beatlejuice is awesome!
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Please post some of your paintings of old schools, I'd love to see them. Ps doesn't the internet suck
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>>2666210
It's Guernica to a fault. I mean, it's good on a technical level, but it doesn't really say anything.

>>2666181
I feel like this piece is at least straying towards a new idea, but I think it's also taken a step back in terms of color composition. The bright primaries quite literally push the balance over the tipping point. That aspect of it doesn't seem quite as thought out as the other piece.

These are really cool experiments nonetheless.

>>2666198
Saying art is dead is like saying language is dead.
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>>2666220
>>2666193
This is some abstract from a series I be been working on
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>>2666181
loomis
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>everytime I seem the name of my city it's always something like this
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>>2667492
Kek
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>>2667492
What, you don't like it? :^)

>>2667437
Could be interesting, but if it's part of a series I think we need to see more than just one to get its context.
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>>2667524
I have plenty more
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>>2668802
These aren't framed yet. Where did OP go?
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>>2666181

Honest feedback OP,

Your abstract art is terrible, but your figurative art could be super fun. As it is now it looks terribly outdated and unoriginal as hell, like the work of a nerd teenager trying to get into art school. However, if you used modern themes and designs, to make it current and original, it could be pretty cool.
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I gotta be honest OP your work just kinda feels empty. There's really no craftsmanship on your sculpts and painting, strokes are wobbly and the sculpts give off an impression that you were struggling immensely with the material. They all just look unfinished to me.
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>>2666181
Here is some proper feedback

You're "art"' is empty. It is not art. You are not an artist.

Bye.
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>>2672553
>>2673111
>>2673135
You guys are the biggest freaking idiots. His work is superb and amazing.
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>>2673138
You're dumber than a cup of dirt if you think any of that shit is "art".
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>>2673144
Hahahaha you are not going to get anywhere with your ideological bigotry and stubbornness.

You have no capacity to understand anything beyond representational. You think art is about skill and showing off. Good for you.
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>>2673144
I will bet 100 million dollars that you will not make it as an artist because you are no real artist.

You won't make it, and your stupid ideas about art will die with you when you go to the grave.
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>>2673166
What makes you think I am trying to "make it"?hahahahaha

>>2673162
God damn it. You're a fucking idiot.hahaha
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>>2673162
Keks man I like abstract art and surrealism, Picasso had craftsmanship and knew his shit, he didn't hide behind any muh style bullshit.

I would like to take look at OPs studies and try to see how his process is.
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>>2673171
Go away child.
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>>2666181
You need Loomis.
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>>2673913
Everyone has their unique process of arriving at the final product. Everyone is free to do what they wish.
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I realize that I may have been too harsh initially. Perhaps you reminded me of another narcissist on this board. Or maybe even the slightest bit of confidence when presenting art that unfathomably bad is enough to send even Buddha into a rage. But now I don't feel so bad anymore. You've confirmed my suspicions.

Maybe you had a bad critique at wherever it is they keep you. Maybe you just wanted to go online to get a pat on the back. Sorry buddy, this isn't the place to get that. You just walked into the fucking lion's den. And if you are so skilled as you say to be, you should be able to take this criticism in stride. Because you don't need Anonymous's hugs and kisses right? Because you're so accomplished and confident an artist? Oh b-but criticism doesn't matter if I don't see the art the critic has made themselves! If you were such a fucking artistic Messiah maybe you could've played your cards better and not flipped off the handle at the first hard critique and got me to post my work as a friendly sort of back-and-forth critique. You know, extend the olive branch like such an amazing individual you are? Maybe you could've taught me something!

But no. You can't. You can't even teach yourself.

I wouldn't want your art in my house. I wouldn't even want it in my garbage. I'd sooner burn it than let the junkyard rats suffer its existence. Now stop goading me. I don't want to hurt your feelings
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>>2666181
I'll bite. Your work looks like it was ripped out of a Art history textbook. Those Picasso-Essie works lack an understanding of Cubism and the deconstruction of space. You've mimiced the style, removed the content and have come late to the show by 90 years. Your abstracts belong in 1960 with the other Abstract Expressionist works.

So step one is throw out the history books and hit the galleries. Figure out what is contemporary and appeals to you. Work around the styles presented there but stop fucking copying. You are not Picasso!

Next is subject matter, what the fuck are you trying to say with your art? You're a good painter, but shitty artist (this actually lumps you in with most of ic).

Be new, not a copy. Keep working man
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>>2666210
The seventh seal is cool though. Like the roughness of your oils.
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>>2674076
Everyone is a special snowflake indeed.
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