Need some feedback.

Potential for what? Just do what you like and sell it

Yep, the mouth looks a bit off to me though. Your style is unique so it looks pleasing. Reminds me of those early LucasArts point and click games.

I'm not an art professor so I can't give any more suggestions but I think if you kept at it you could go somewhere with it.

It's shit, next.

If you could somehow make it look less stiff, maybe with dynamic lines. I would give a comic a try if it was drawn like this.

Looks like a man in drag.
And it's not because of the strong jaw, and thick eyebrows. It's the shaggy hair.

Don't try drawing every strand, draw the hair in larger bunches/ shapes and then add details.

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also a huge fucking adam's apple and shoulders that reach the bottom of the skull.