Critique This Style

>>2632019
The style looks pretty cool. I'm a beginner so take what I say with a grain, but I think the outlines could stand to be thinned down a bit. The skull itself is fuckhuge and looks a bit out of perspective as well.

>>2632204
>>2632019
the skulls look way too big for the bodies. and they're in odd perspectives compared to the body. they dont really look attached

>>2632019
>>2632204
are these skulls even supposed to be human???

>>2632207
>>2632212
Maybe they're feral children wearing the skulls of their fallen prey, namely a really big, deformed human and appears to be an orangutan

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OP here, >>2632204 isn't me but it's cool to see someone else's take on a similar concept.

>>2632028
I normalized some lineweights, tweaked the perspective, and cleaned things up in general.

Think the thing throwing some people off is the vanishing point for the face is above the apparent horizon instead of on it, but I like the off-kilter vibe it gives.

Thanks for the feedback!

>>2632225
you woulnt really be able to wear a skull without considerable effort to modify it.

>>2632204
This is well done; what medium?

>>2632289
This is why you fail

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>>2632237
>I like the off-kilter vibe it gives

It looks like this desu

>>2632019
I dislike those heavy, cartoonish outlines.

>>2632289
You can just take a rock and bash the fucker open at the bottom, as long as it's big enough. Though you're right about near-human sized skulls.

Hey Man, this actually looks fairly decent, try looking at Momento Mori, can be old or modern, just take a look, it might give some more inspiration.

>>2634178
memento mori. and really it has little to do with OP's image other than often including skulls.