Alternative Art/Stylization General

>>2626414
Good choice.

>>2626485
God dammit Pops where's your tumblr/pixiv/deviantart or whatever?

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>>2626485
Well good job, you are one of the very few and rare gems that actually has an appeal and a likeness in their work instead of a dull and lifeless cookie cutter symbol; something /ic/ will not understand how to convey in their art and never will.

I advice you to leave this place before you turn bitter and sour and lose the consciousness that is indicated and expressed in your figures there's nothing for you to gain here and I say this with sincerity you will have everything to lose here.

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>>2626414
something's bothering me about this composition wise (linework aside)

>>2626536
have her titty nudged against the lil girl's head.

>>2626530
I think it's the placement of the hips and legs that are bothering me, everything is good tho

>>2626485
nice man

>>2626492
his vk is /imnotpops

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>>2626485
ltle fxd

>>2626555
muchj better. her face bothered me so much actually

>>2626555
Where are you from Poops? I like your shit nigga.

>>2626559
Kazakstan)

>>2626555
>>2626561
Ten bucks you're a kron wannabe. shit's lifeless
Also write in real english please

>>2626530
Its un unbalanced leaning to the right.
if I was you I would add more stuff, it feels kind of empty

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>>2626571
here are some variations i had in mind when i started. some seem so busy but i agree this one feels like it's missing an element.

>>2626542
ah shit ill work on that, good lookin out.

>>2626555
Are you able to not chicken scratch everything aside from the face

>>2626569
>>2626701
your jelly is showing

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Sketch

>>2626723
I'm the first post, if anything he's technically very good, the knowledge of volumes and anatomy is evident. I just think that he's trying to imitate kron in face stru ture and impostation

>>2626727
She is a cuck

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Some kind of mouse robot thing I saw. Drawing seems so pointless nowadays.

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Ah fuck it, I don't think I'm gonna finish it

>>2626727
>Rem
>Not drawing Emilia
wew lad

>>2626860

Then you should branch out and draw different things, don't let yourself stagnate.

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>>2626888
Looks good but the dress makes no sense. Get some reference and study the 7 basic folds first.

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some doodles

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Drew some peeps at the local drink n draw.

>>2626903
looks like some krenz sketches, good job

>>2626908
Looks great. What did you use?

>>2626908
That's racist.
Send this man to prison, please.

>>2626946
Its cute racism though.

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>>2626735
>the knowledge of volumes and anatomy is evident
>Pops
Bait

>>2626528
lol
all he's got based on this pic is a good grasp for constructing faces out of symbols. I take a look at the bodies and all I see is unfinished flatness.

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>ignore the writing it was a quick sketch for a draw thread

I want to go back an actually draw a proper face and so forth. Does anyone have a good way to draw lace patterns/fabric patterns. I want to make my own and not download a brush.

>>2626933
I used a brush pen, .5 red lead, and a bluish gray marker from a set.
>>2626946
Lol her teeth really did look that way though.

>>2627025

If you mean the inner pattern symbols you're gonna need to draw at a far bigger res than that to make it worthwhile.

>>2627029

It's actually really big, this is just a screenshot. I want to have a realistic lace pattern but I want to avoid using others peoples brushes or vectors.

>>2627034

My advice is you do have to learn to use vectors for this kind of thing.

>>2627012
Are you kidding? his body volumes are some of the best you can see in these threads.

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>>2627066

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>>2627066

>>2627066

I think traces pics and slaps an anime head on it tbhhh.

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>>2627066

>>2626908
>drink n draw

damn that sounds lit. i wonder if they have anything like that in my town..

>>2627070
>>2627086
>>2627095
>>2627286
>how funny lol
This board needs to be culled. seriously

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>>2626555
You're good, Pops. Don't listen to the other people, even if you're imitating Kron. The point should be "wow, he's capable of imitating Kron and producing different, fresh stuff". If not, congratulations, you're on Kron's level, and can be better.

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>>2626578
meh

>>2627287
They probably do. Google drink n draw and paste your hometown. There are like 4 in mine but ive obly ever gone to the one.

>>2627291
Stop shilling Pops here, /pa/ autist. He draws same shit for three years without any improvments. But at least he doesn't post his paintings over photos anymore

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>>2627302
>and producing different, fresh stuff
Wew lad

>>2626903
>>2626902

Guys like you, do you just use photoshop for your linework or clip studio?

>>2627338
those were drawn in photoshop, but for actual linework i would use sai or csp

Can someone link me to this Kron person everyone is talking about please?

Google didn't help.

>>2627302
>If not, congratulations, you're on Kron's level, and can be better.
Okay bait confirmed.

>>2627424
google=>ilya kuvshinov

>>2627429
Oh Ilya, okay I know then.

>>2627333
>everyone lives in my little gossip world!
What the fuck is even /pa/ you goddamn faggot

>>2627475
Its really darn cute but her left arm need a fix dude.

>>2627310
You know, its not really bad, it just feels like weak sauce. maybe a more dynamic pose could do the trick

>>2627289
I think you should exaggerate more the proportions, smaller body, thinner stilyzed legs and such

>>2627515
Thanks, but could you elaborate a little more?

>>2627310

I think it would be better if he was a little hunched in the second pic. I'm not sure if that fits his character though.

>>2627310
I like the arrangement, but I agree with >>2627622

Have his head stick out more toward the front or push the lower torso to the back. Gives it more of a dynamic feel. Hands could also come closer to the front, not sure if it'll be overkill though.

>>2627511
Russian /ic/ where Pops came from. It's real shithole compared to /ic/. So don't even bother to google

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Unfinished, big tiddy grill floating in space.
It seems like it works for some people, so I though I'd give it a try.

>>2627310
>16% before loomis
>99% after loomis,vilpuu and iron artist

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So i think im done probably, hopefully i didnt overlook anything major

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i feel dead inside

>>2627622
>>2627517
>>2627627

damn i feel this. yeah i was wondering what the pic could use cause color and comp wise it feels ok but yall are right, the poses are weak. ill try and make em more dramatic, thanks.

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>>2627739
tryin to get the perspective down but also don't wanna obscure the viewer's dick too much, is tricky

>>2627730
im tellin you nigga, have her head nudge against her titty. trust me im an expert.

>>2627739
blog? i like these.

>>2627739
blog?

>>2627739
Blog?

When will my drawings start to become appealing?

>>2627755
I meant to ask you before but what's your blog, asis-man? I want to study and appreciate your muh style

>of course the next time I caught you it'd be a futa image

...also your perspective looks off but that's just me.

Unless it's absolutely pivotal, maybe put 'her' arms behind her back for now, the normie on the street isn't going to accuse you of hand hiding or particularly care.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=62eW7EbP1Qc

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Some old shit. I would say it was to practice lighting, but it was more to see how I could work over something purely of values (and how it comes out).

>>2627755

Why not have the hand and arm resting on her leg? Or more to the side and less centered? You could also try bouncing her up in a more pullout position.

>>2627821
You're only making colors brighter or darker and using value incorrectly

When there's warm light the lit surface has warm colors and the shadows are cold, and viceversa

It's also not a matter of using either orange or blue because there are cold oranges and warm blues. The palette has to be in balance

>>2627823

Yeah, I know, those are from a month or two ago. My color theory was incredibly shit (and still is). I've never really been able to find a good guideline for following colors (although it's probably somewhere in /beg/ or books). I've been following Sycra more recently to see how he goes about it deciding colors and warm/cold ranges etc. At the moment I'm only effective in painting out grayscale values, and dealing with volume, terrible at actually painting.

>>2627830
sycra is not a painter (and is pretty bad anyways) so that won't do

get 'alla prima' (it's on the book thread) and read the color chapter

>>2627889

Sounds pretty fair.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9kQllLy_X4I
I was using this as a basic idea of picking colour and where to stay in the wheel. I wouldn't say he's "bad" but stuck. His work has not changed in quality for almost 2 years, despite obvious ways to improve.

I will definitely get alla prima. Now that I'm finished with classes (atleast for some time) I can finally start reading/concentrating on art.

As a side question, how do you feel about sinixdesign? Only found his channel recently so I haven't been able to watch him much but I like his method and outcome.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zC3OxonJcXQ

>>2627816
nah, she isn't a girl with a dick (for once (tho the person she's riding might be... still haven't decided))
still no blog unfortunately, did make an FA but can't remember the password after the mandatory resets, lol
also what's "asis-man", not familiar with that
good song tho

>>2627821
i'll try movin it slightly to the right (her left), but i still really wanna have it there cause it helps push the perspective/i love the intimacy of jus gently resting a hand on your partners body

>>2627768
>>2627770
blog?

>>2627839
neat

>>2627992
ASIS = anterior superior iliac spine fambo. Bummer on the blog, until next time!

Krons a trace artist anyway so why do people care?

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How bad it is?

>>2628742
Why does her right eye look angry but her left eye is calm

>>2628742
Unfinished.
Keep going then ask again.

>>2626903
Blog? Andrae is that you?

>>2628750
Wow, that was so helpful.

>>2627821
lel is that a back
nicce
blog?

also why is it upside down

>>2627839
saved in my /blog?/ folder

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>>2626908
StoryBoard practice.

>>2628886
I have no idea what's going on under the neck.

>>2627935
I don't know much about how rendering is tackled in digital art, as I'm traditional (acrylics and oils, and hopefully more stuff soon), but the basics are all the same. dude looks like he knows what he's doing and that he also has a traditional background

sorry for the late answer

>>2628886
BLOG ME

>>2628899
missile tits

>>2628961
is this kind of joke on this board? i'm new here.

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why is phil collins' face value so good

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made this for a friend in about 5 hours.

>>2629547
That's really good anon! I like what you did with the line depth a lot (I think that's word for it?)

>>2629566
thx anon

>>2629677
blog?

>>2629677
So when you do that little braid design do you actually draw each one out or do you just copy/paste it and then rotate?

>>2629687
that's a patterned brush in photoshop

>>2629677
the rendering is betraying the form in a few key places, mostly on the arms, also your bounce/rim lighting is a bit too strong, it shouldn't be reaching the same intensity of the upper midtones in the rest of the figure as it does in a few areas on your drawing. your speculars are a bit too bright and the overall base skintone is a bit too red to the point that she looks a lil sunburned (tho that might just be me having a different monitor displaying colors different from yours)

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when can I draw anime?
pic related is a short study I did

>>2629677
blog?

>>2629703
stay away from that weeb shit, you're cleary on a level above everyone in this thread, just keep doing what you did there

>>2629716

>stay away from that weeb shit

if he wants to draw weeb shit let him be

>you're cleary on a level above everyone in this thread

nope

>just keep doing what you did there

if you mean studies sure


while I differ with the guy, do stay away from weeb shit till you feel confident enough with human figure, study proportions after that

>>2629703

Anytime. I recommend Mark Crilley.

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>>2629677

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>>2629858

>>2629858
you got a blog, anon?

>>2629857
>mark crilley

please do not

>>2629858
>>2629866
blog?

>>2629866

good shit anon

It really doesn't take a lot to impress /ic/ does it?

>>2629909

the blog thing is a meme

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>>2627302
tnx

>>2629914

it isn't though, people can actually be interested in different styles and following fellow artists. So take your precious meta-knowledge of ic and shove it up your ass.

>>2629858
blog?

>>2629924
Blog?

>>2629925

Whoa back off my chest bro.

blog?

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its nowhere near done but i need critiques
epecially about the shadow on the ground

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>>2630025
Shadows don't add unless there are two light sources.

>>2630030
shit .. thanks

>>2629858
>>2629866
Not even memeing, what is your blog?

>>2626727
eyelashes point the other way

eyebrows too far up


just shit really

>>2630025
Extend your canvas size vertically to show more of the shadow silhouette for a better composition.
Silhouette shape doesnt look interesting too so you should fix that. (Add horns, show legs, etc.)

>>2629866
qt

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>>2630200
i changed it up

thoughts

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>>2629945

Sorry.

>>2630503
apology accepted

>>2630493
whoa, this comp is way more dynamic; it feels more like the character is being hunted/attacked.

fix that awkward perspective tho. but good shit.

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>>2629866

>>2629698
Man I really suck at coloring. There's too much red hue on her skin I agree. Better mind it next time.

Thx.

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I've been told it's better to post stuff early on than wasting time in a thing that turned out it's no good.

Is this a good gesture to start working on?

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>>2630964
Or maybe this one?

>>2630934
blog?

>>2630964
>>2630965
>better to post stuff early on than wasting time
I agree on this, but those are a bit too early. Make some progress than evaluate again.

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>>2630977
How about this?

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>>2630977
There's also this.

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>>2630977
Or this?

>>2631163
>>2631162
>>2631161

Which one is better?

>>2631164
I think you should just apply them all into one image instead of taking up 6 posts.

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>>2626860
Evolves into... whatever this is...

>>2626897
Been struggling to get pencil on paper recently

>>2629858
>>2629866
>>2630934
Are you korean?

Your style reminds me of Kim Il Kwang.

school work which I never got to finish much

>>2630493
soo cool.!

>>2631164
whatever you do, do not >>2631162
most retarded pose I've ever seen

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How do I into symmetry?

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food

>>2631332
Well yes, though I don't know who Kim Il Kwang is. You caught those words on the sign didn't you? I forgot to delete those.

>>2631794
Nice!

>>2631794
a PIG

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>>2631642
Retarded how, exactly? As in the subject matter?

This is the picture I used as a reference. It's a hip-hop dance.

>>2630934
>>2629866
>>2629858
I really love your linework

>>2631825
>hip-hop dance
>Retarded how, exactly?
not the brightest anon, are you?

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Learning to sexualize the nichijous

>>2631968
DELETE THIS

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What do you think about the colors on this one? I have no idea of what i should do on the rendering phase...

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Been experimenting with sprite art after working on pen an paper for so long. I'm still trying to get the hang of a tablet, its a lot different than working with a pencil.

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Should I fix/turdpolish it or should I just move on?

>>2632160

move on to the beginner thread

>>2632160

That chest isn't the only thing that's flat.

You need Hampton: Figure Design and invention.

>>2632023
Looks good enough for me.

>>2629858
>>2629866
how do you make your lines so expressive the fuck

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Sketches. I promise the next thing I make will end up being something complete.

>>2632153

That's not exactly sprite work friend, just no AA. Not a sprite artist, but shouldn't you work on a way smaller canvas.

>>2632336

He uses a lot of disconnects and focuses on form and expression rather than perfection. There's alot of unattached lines and rigged curves etc, but it's not chicken scratch, and that lack of perfection and kind of scribbly nature makes it more pleasing. That's just my idea though.

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>>2631325
Random stuff, hard to draw in bed. So much back sliding after long breaks

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Clothing studies / linework practice.

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concept stuff

>>2632428
Good shit!

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>>2631698

>>2627355
Why is it dark around your light source? And why is the cast shadow beneath it so diffuse?

The blood/water needs ripples, unless she's been standing completely still for a few minutes.

>big veiny dick in top-left corner.

>>2632509
SOIYA! SOIYA!

>no Cagliostro

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>>2632303
Thanks, man.
>>2632023

Polished it some more, but i'm not used to this style. what do you think?

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Trying out stippling but i'm struggling with the ground foliage arrangement and density

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It ain't anime, but it's alternative and it's stylized and it's driving me mad.

I've spent days trying to get the material for this down. I'm supposed to be able to draw a sphere with the black metal's material on it with the lighting from the scene so I can apply it to a complex shape, but I can't. I don't get it, I start with either black or dark grey since it has little or no diffuse light, and then I try to add the light sources and it all just goes to shit. Even the little brown reflection on the bottom left is driving me nuts. It's stylized more than I can handle.

Can someone tell me how to break this down because I have like 6 more of these things I have to work out and/or draw this one's material on a sphere for me and maybe something will click and I'll see the connections between the final complex shape and the material on a basic shape.

I have actually lost sleep trying to tackle this and it's embarrassing but I'm obsessed and need to get this.

>>2632427
i really like this style, but your legs seem a little short/thin for those bodies.

>>2629340
I-Io please no don't do that

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Doodle of an alolan meowth gijinka.. might line and color tomorrow

>>2633206
hnngg muh dick!

>>2633206
What is that grey meowth. No moonspeak

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First time trying out b&w to colour.
Think I'm gonna be sticking to this workflow in the future.

>>2633208
The new pokemon games introduce forms of pokemon that changed over years and years due to living on an isolated island. That meowths dark type now.

>>2633210
O-oneechan...

>>2633160
Why don't you just google black metal ball, sphere, material, texture and such. I already see a lot of references.

>>2633236
Because I want the material and lighting to be as consistent as possible instead of basing it on any metal orb with any light setup.

>>2633246
But you can't make it, don't you. Just deal with it and improvise. It's better than perfection.

And no, I'm not mocking you. Seriously, if you are that desperate, at least you should have posted your work in progress or something not just vague descriptions. We don't know shit about your current status of the pic, the shape of the object, nor its lighting conditions, right?

To be honest, even if you posted the wip it is far more efficient for YOU to just look up some tutorial or something, draw it, then show us your black metal ball so that we could give you feedbacks. If there's no tutorial, copy and paste other images of black metal balls and transform / adjust it. If you don't know how to, or just can't do that simple level of retouching or kinda matt-painting shit or something, you should reconsider your CG tool of choice in the first place.

>>2632509
blog? deviantart?

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I cannot into composition/art for the life of me right now.

>>2633206
nice.
but fix those lines come on man

>>2633436
I think the composition looks fine for the most part!! Only thing off putting is the cat/bunny creature on the ground, especially since the dragon isn't paying it any mind.
You seem to have two great characters here though, I'd suggest giving your piece some story; have them interact a bit!!

>>2633442

Not my characters. Just monster Hunter. May scrub out the felyne.

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>>2632367
Power drill

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>>2626414
spoopy

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>>2633681
How about you fucking scale your work and then pick the thread you want to post it. There's no point posting it simultaneously to two threads. And yes, it's shit.

>>2633684
you have anger issues eric

>>2633681
resize your shit

>>2633699
Nein

>>2627025
wheres the booootyyy

>>2629866
how do you draw streetsz like that?

>>2633210
you doing that lab coloring mode thing or just on overlays? Looks neat.

>>2633691
he's right on everything though, and you're shit on everything.
you're almost more pitiable than angering with your illastrat-tier attitude, you're never going to make progress.

>>2631794
man I want to eat ramen
not those shitty instant noodles or murrican shit ramen

>>2633731
you´re a whining baby and you´re wrong. Been drawing for many years and the first ones were terrible compared to that magnificence you´re witnessing.

>>2633132
love the style though. Works perfectly without color

>>2633728
Iirc I used overlay and colour layers and then touched up everything afterwards. There wasn't much of a method to my madness I was just playing around trying to find what worked.

Thank you btw!!

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I tried another pose on /ic/'s suggestion.

Which one is better, left or right?

I thought right was better until my gf went in and said right was too fat and I don't know what to believe.

Help?

>>2633824
exaggerate it sempai, make her waist thinner and bigger hips or even rib cage.

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>>2633901
Whoops, forgot to resize. Sorry.

Based on character design alone, would you read a ghost detective comic with this cast?

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Working on redrawing an old piece from about a year back.

>>2633976
Totally.

>>2633976
Your style is really unique and pretty
Do you draw comics or some shit?

>>2633992
Nete!

>>2633999
Thanks, and yeah, that's my goal.

My friend is a writer, and we're gonna get started on working on this comic in a couple months. We've moved in together so we can support each other and lower the cost of living as much as possible so we can work on making different comics and stuff.

Our goal is to have a good 50% of this project done by around this time next year, and then start releasing chapters bi-weekly, have them online, free for everyone to read. If people like our stuff, then we'll open up a Patreon so we can stop working, and live off of comic making. We wanna make sure we have a very good quality project done before we start asking people to support us though, we want our work to speak for itself.

This particular comic, is a ghost detective comic, that's inspired by Watanabe's work (ya know, Bebop, Champloo, etc...), so it's a bit of a blend of classic ghost mystery, and 90s Punk counterculture. It's set in London in the late 90's. It also unique in that all the ghosts aren't really ghosts, but rather personal demons manifested as spirits. So each chapter is written in that Champloo/Bebop style of fashion that's very notorious of Watanabe's work. Th art style itself is also picked intentionally. That's why I chose flat colors and such. Cause I want it to have that pop art look to it too. Have it evoke that late 90s early 2000s nostalgia ya know. The style I'm drawing in is also slightly reminiscent of 90s anime.

By around this time next year, I should be shilling the first chapter round these parts, as well as /co/, /a/, and so forth.

>>2633976
Would do without the sameface problem.

The colors are too flat too, no shading at all.

Also loomis. That is not how faces work.

You are still too new to try stylization. Try to go for a 100% realistic painting style first before trying anything else, like shakespeare.

As for the other question, half those characters are too ugly to be a ghost story, and the style is too western.

You should go for a style more similar to thos:

>>2631968

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>>2634025
This is why no one worth a shit uses or sticks around /ic/

>>2634025
lol

3/10, a little too obvious. Almost got me, the loli bit gave it away for sure though.

>>2634025
You a shit person and so wrong on levels.

I don't know much my english so bad, but you are a suck person and very wrong.

>>2633976

I live in Japan. I am very like your lines and colors.

I would buy manga on ghost story, on yours characters.

Nice Work!

>>2631968
That looks like an adult anatomy strapped to the loli body. Would not fap.

>>2634028
>>2634028
>>2634035

He's right you know.

>>2633976
It's nicer looking than most comic styles I've seen, you need to practice faces more (6th and 10th people offend my eyes the most) before you put anything in action but it looks pretty interesting otherwise.

>>2634035
Shidd boi get some English lessons, you can't shitpost like that.

>>2633824
nah dude, rely on your own eyes. ic isn't going to guide you through this. does that neck look alright to you? does the expression look alright to you? think about it yourself.

look at better artists to get an idea for how it's supposed to look

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>>2634025
>the retards shit on this post
>they don't realize that this is exactly what redjuicefag needs
it's like a sick comedy around here.

I think I did some good by not bothering with construction and focusing on gesture until now

Now that I feel more confident with lines and drawing in general, all of a sudden all those boxes and cilinders and construction is like a fucking godsend instead of the unsourmountablistibitistic obstacles they seemed to be when I first started.

I can even tell when a drawing is stiff.

Hooray!

>>2633989
Top left pose. You got that from Senjougahara didn't ya?

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Ready to try to do a full illustration, rather than just bodies in the void.

>>2634172
Redjuicefag?

You might have me confused with someone else anon. I usually go by ManlySpirit online and stuff. Though I don't often tripfag. Should I? It just feels like it goes against the point of anonymous culture...

>>2634246
It's shit.

It will always be shit.

Why even bother? Just give up on drawing and watch tv all day instead.

You should try for a more interesting camera angle. If that is not possible, just try a bit of construction and get a bit of 3D in there.

>>2634287
Sorry you're projecting so hard, man.

>>2634204
It did cross my mind as I did it, but no.

I just saw a picture of someone with a long skirt with rabbits at her feet in a similar shot. I decided to pull up her skirt and that just kind of happened.

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15 min doodle to warm up

>>2627839
blog pls hnng

>>2628742
the right eye looks like you drew it horizontally, didn't like it, and then angled it too much after.

>>2634573
That chin region seems a bit iffy.

>>2634573

nice try dorito chan

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>>2633506
Knife party

>>2634846
mildly erotic

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kind of study

>>2634846
>>2634915
gonna need your blogs please

>>2633976
Girl with black hair and the blonde girl are mega qts.

Would read about ghost stories with them and maybe the old guy with the beanie

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could use a fresh set of eyes on this. i'm unsure of her proportions.

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>>2635015
Girl with the black hair is the MC's younger sister. The blonde chick is a living cocktease.


Got two more.

Finally got around to making progress on my Mononoke BotW thing. Should be done this weekend.

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Generic soldier from imagination. Tell me the truth famalam.

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>>2635052
Also, Smash WiiU render for Isaac from GS. Not finished yet.

Should also be done this weekend.

>>2635052
I feel like this could be a really nice picture if they didnt have those lifeless expressions

>>2635053
Rotate it, anon.

>>2635073
Fixable.

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does this count?

>>2635051
Her arm and hand look a little wonky to me, the perspective seems off on them I think. Also whatever's sticking out of her mouth looks awful at that angle, it doesn't read well at all.

>>2635144
i'll play around with the arm. and i hadn't considered how the lollipop stick might read. gotta find a better angle.

thanks for the crit.

>>2634846
sick af

>>2635120
SpaceMarinesArePrettyCool!!

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sloppy lineart heaven

quick thing from last night

>>2635051
I agree with what >>2635144 said. That lolipop or whatever makes her face look really deformed.

>>2633976
If the comic was free, then yeah

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>>2634172
>>2634275

I actually haven't posted here in a long time because I've been doing some stuff other than animu

>>2635589
Do you have a blog?

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some recent scribbles.

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>>2635686

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>>2635144 >>2635408
better?

i redrew the arm a few times, but didn't get any wiser. if it's not properly in perspective i just can't see it :/

>>2635688
Love your colors

>>2629924
I like your perception of noses, putting shaded values rather than a contour line to show presence.

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>>2626414

>>2635961
happy 32nd birthday, lefty!
ill always love you

>>2633436
Blog pls; do you have more dragons?

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>>2635961
is that the waifu pill?

>>2635980
thanks! not my bday tho!

>>2636005
lol yeah
cute girl, nice background c :

>>2634915
You still don't have a blog? I'd follow you if you were to post whatever you'd draw on it.

>>2635800
Move her shoulder back a little bit, since she's turning around, and maybe straighten her arm.

>>2631419
pyro?

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lel

hey, it's a new thread >>2636277

>>2635653
Sure. You can find me on
http://cabulb.tumblr.com/
and
http://cabulb.wordpress.com/

>>2629866
the signs say kimchi but the decorations say china.

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How do you draw anime hair that isn't exactly large clumps/straight/simple? Hair in real life is mostly in large forms unless it's frizzy or curly hair but in anime like pic related anything goes.

Is there something I'm missing besides replicating the contours/shapes?