Draw thread, last one dead. Post your current drawings here

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Portrait from life, charcoal and white ctayon on toned paper. 3 hours.

I feel like im making a lot of little mistakes that add up to an ultimately bad drawing. Can anyone help me spot some of the more glaring ones?

>>2616594
why does this look like its been through a shitty filter?

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>>2616597

>>2616598
i guess my real question is wtf did you?

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>>2616599
Looked fine in my phone.
Any better?, used a filter to remove the dirty of my sketching

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>>2616587
Well the most obvious mistake is that your proportions are fucked. Learn loomis head with thirds and then Reilly's abstraction.

Also, you don't know your anatomy, your lighting lacks definition (learn planes, see pic related) and if it's from life, you probably didn't use any measuring at all.

Overall it's not bad, just pointing out mistakes.

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One of my first sketches of a girl's face. Nothing too complex, just simple pencil to sketchpad really.

Just wanted an honest opinion of whether it is any good or not.

>>2616615
Lines are too tick for a realistic drawing, rendering needs more work. Also, what techniques did you use to copy it?

>>2616614
thanks man. I guess just need to bolster my knowledge and visual vocabulary. drawing what you see doesn't turn out well if your eyes are uneducated. I'll focus on consistency as well. thanks for the crit!

>>2616615
I would decide if you want to do a line drawing or a realistic rendering before you start.

>>2616618

Sorry what do you mean by techniques of copying it?

>>2616621
Yeah, what book or curse did you took to learn to draw from still life?

>>2616622

I didn't. I just did it.

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>>2616624

>>2616625
doing it by yourself the first time it's not bad, it can be good for comparison later after you went thru some training, and it also points out the mistakes you have to tackle

not the same anon btw

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>>2616625

You could say I'm self taught.

Here's another one I did.

>>2616634
you are teaching at a third grade level bro. hit up the book thread.

>>2616634
learn loomis
also go to /beg/

There is no understanding of head construction nor are there planes of the face in >>2616615
Also work on your side view portraits. Hint: it's the eyes.

Here's your (You)s btw

>>2616587
>Polished a turd for three hours
Dis nigga

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>>2616586
So, I tried to use the playing card as inspiration but it seems I´ve failed. Also is a really simple sketch

>>2616586
> not linking last thread.
> not using good art as the thread picture
> being a new faggot

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Don't know if I belong here..:(

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some sketches i did today.

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I have been at the same skill level for the better part of 5 years and i might be getting worse then better.

Wait. what?

Fuck I thought I clicked draw thread
is this /beg/?

am I high or something?

>>2619797
No, I was thinking the same thing fampai

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full image is too big, link here:

http://i.imgur.com/letb1vM.jpg

kind of edgy but w/e i know the anatomy isnt perfect but i just like drawing grimy shit

>>2616932
thank you for the constructive criticism. kindly post your work.

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Im getting worse. Why am i getting worse?

>>2625106
edges bruh

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I've been experimenting with digital painting and drawing in general lately. Be honest with me, is this good?

>>2625136
And yes, sorry I forgot to erase some of the paint that went outside it, I'm an idiot.

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>>2625077
>posts art on thread meant for criticism
>gets fucking triggered when art gets criticized

>>2625147
Shitpost =/= criticism. Point out what is wrong.

>>2616587
>>2625106
You're measuring incorrectly

>>2625106
big nose don't you think?

>>2616932
ive spend days polishing turds desu senpai
those were dark times.

>>2616587
Just move on, keep knocking out portraits and then look back at this in one month. You'll notice right away what is wrong.

>>2625178
Thanks. Keeping my head down.
>>2625175
I know. Im just not sure what mistake i am making. Ill bring a ruler next time.
>>2625176
Yeah. The model did have a slightly large nose but i definitely overdid it. She wasnt happy when she saw it. I felt bad.

>>2625201
>She wasnt happy when she saw it. I felt bad.
I kek'd
I like the eyes a lot though.

>>2624272

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Fairly quick black soft pastel, done a few nude portraits recently, want feedback cheers

>>2619781
>le troll face

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Almost finished with this carbon piece. Should I darken the sky?

>>2625221
>Should I darken the sky?
nah man

>>2625226
what am i watching

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>>2625221
light + light = nothing

dark + dark = nothing

light + dark = life

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this too weird? composition fucked up?
errr,don't know how to feel about it...

>>2625257
Looks like she's missing a leg.

>>2625257
perspective is off, right hand is off, leg??

>>2625277
>>2625285
I tried it do it a couple of times but failed.
Thanks for spotting my mistakes,this is too ambitious for my skill level,i'd rather start something fresh

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Finished another quick piece. Kind of a cliched theme but felt like posting it here.

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Pretty sure I got the ref for this off of here.

>>2625361
nice man really digging it

>>2625251
there's lots of life in that pic of yours