I recently made this, was wondering what /ic thought of it.

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This is what it loos like without guide lines and posterization.

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And these are some spinoffs I made of it.

>>2461511
the scribble-tier houses and lack of coherent perspective clashes with the ruled window frame, and not in any meaningful way imo. there is a charm to the scribbles but the shit on the windowsill look really bad and amateur.

>>2461523
this one is the best development since it gets rid of both the window frame and the shit on the window sill. it's got an an a e s t h e t i c feel to it, in fact it might make a decent vapourwave album cover, but it looks unfinished at the moment.

i rate don'tevermakeyourownthreadeveragain out of resizebeforeyoupost

I appreciate the experimentation but the base drawing is wonky enough that no matter how you spin it it'll look bad.

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>>2461539
I live on a second floor appartement across a street that goes uphill, I know the perspective seems wonky but it actually checks out trust me. >Also bear in mind that i'm a fucking loser who can't do shit and probably should just kill himself.
What do you think of this one?

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I like this one the most.

Youve defs got talent. Better than 90% of the shit on this board

>>2461568
i like where this is one going

also I think i know why I don't like the stuff you put on the window sill. the perspective on that jar in the middle is positively fucked. the inside of the jar shouldn't be visible, not by that much.

All of them lack perfect symmetry which is annoying.

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>>2461572
Thanks m8, for anyone who's interested here's the actual view. I added and removed stuff to my liking, not because I thought it looked better. But because I couldn't get the perspective perfectly right. I hate artists who make up bullshit to cover up their mistakes.
>also I removed that objects that were in the window and pulled up the blinders a bit higher so it's not exactly the same.

>>2461589
Ah thats whats screwing up your originals, the hill. You're not accounting for it correctly

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>>2461579
It's a weird jar. But it's not perfect I admit.

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>>2461596
Any techniques or tips you can give me. Just out of curiosity, believe it or not I like the wonkyness. I'm not trying to perfectly copy everything, because I can't and I don't want to.
>also some random shit I made as a bonus

>>2461609
this thread further proves to me that stoners are the worst artists

>>2461601
emphasize the top of the spout more.

also, I called it a jar when I meant to say pitcher.

>>2461614
this

>>2461614
He's a stone r?

>>2461614
>>2461623
Ok, break my bubble. Tell me why i'm complete shit trash at art. GO!

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Also how's this one?

>>2461511
op stop sucking ur own cock it's not even good, it's actually very bad

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>>2461644
Where did I suck my own cock? Quote me please.

>>2461647
>I suck my own cock
there, "proof"

Dunno about the piece, it's good for your skills, but not much to tell. Seems like you follow some instructions, if yes just continue and you will be fine.

>>2461647
The proof is that you made ~11 versions of some shitty drawing.

>>2461511
keep up the good work op!