Making a american hentai

post work

>>2456495
>Hey there, I am making a type of American Hentai.
>doujin
I can't tell if you're baiting or what.

>>2456495
>what should I do???
Do some sketches, thumbs, concepts, as they are in your mind, write what you think down on a page. See if it makes sense. Probably shelve it for now.

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here is mine, should I continue with this style or should I do more my style?

>>2456723
You know, as much as people complain about weebs and autism shit, western comics can be pretty cringeworthy to.

>>2456732
Can be? They all are.
I was a weeb for a while, but could never stomach western comics.

so far I have about 5 pages and am using mostly Shiwasu No Okina style for reference for the H-scenes

>>2456495
>american
>hentai

both thing doesnt mix,. there is a factor that really making western hentai impossible. You should understand that hentai has different approach on culture, they use daily life for story while western is over-realistic and sometimes has raunchy cheezy storyline involving nigger and bimbotastic blonde.

I am not sure why but western porn is more disgusting to look at, it seems they too affraid to cross porn border to draw younger girl or situation where it is taboo to discuss.

Draw it in the style that's most appropriate. The bar's pretty damn low when it comes to porn anyway. At most people will either fap to it unironically or ignore it

>American hentai
>doujin
Just call it a porn parody you weeb

So I shouldn't call it a hentai then?

>>2456986
No.

Ok thanks for that, so should I copy the art style of the comic so it looks like it's from the same book or should I go with my style?

>>2457209
Just shut up and go draw

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Look into western artists that can actually draw women. One thing I've noticed is that comic artists that can draw women well usually have a better visual language. A lot of pencilers grow up mainly drawing dudes and so they can make a really ripped and blocky Hulk but can't fucking get good shapes for women. It's all bolted on tits and bags of hammers.

Phil Noto, Budd Root, and Rafael Albuquerque are some of my favs, but there are plenty of others as well. They usually get put on comics with female leads