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Critique my concept please and if you want, post your art too

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Im the kind of person who like the other people critique my art. Bad or good critique, its make me really happy.

I was using Paint tool sai in my others illustrations, but today i wanted to learn with Photoshop cs6
(Sorry for my bad english)
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She is a office worker of course
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this is from 2014.. is shit
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Its was a few days ego, another concept
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I can see that heads are your strong point (except the ears), everything else less so. I get that the body isn't really the focal point in any of these, but if you cover up the face with your hand you can see that everything below the neck is quite weak. Uneven man-shoulders, awkward arm blobs, and your boobs are literally circles.
I'd actually like to see some colored work.

You obviously got better from 2014, that's good.

There's a couple existing threads that you can post to e.g. the Anime/Stylization General. This is so that people don't clutter up the board with their individual threads.
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>>2419657
>>2419655
>>2419652
welcome to /ic/.
post in the draw thread.
visit the sticky.
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>>2419835
Stop encouraging idiots to make their own threads.
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>>2419906
yeah i was too nice, should've just had the last sentence
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>>2419835
Ok, thank you very much, im going to keep practicing
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>>2419657
>>2419649

really good better than 99% of /ic/

also saved
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>>2419657
maybe bring her boobs up a little bit more.
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>>2420259
Thanks :)
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>>2420275
I would say the boobs are too high already. Unless they're fake tits.
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>>2419649
Blog?
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>>2419649
>柴くみこ
>>2419655
I have no idea, bad quality artist
>>2419657
>kronprinz

I would give you an critique on your art OP.... when you are going to post it
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>>2419657
>another concept
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Linework, im going to put some color
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>>2419657
hows copying kron doing it for ya?
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>>2420580
I didnt copy anyone, i just got inspired by him :)
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Here is my first digital ilustration when i bought my graphic tablet 1 year ago
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A fan art, 2 month ago
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>>2419649
The ear is too far to the front, the jacket doesn't follow the forms of the body correctly, something about the shoulders makes them look dislodged
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i can't believe you came up with the concept of an anime girl with huge tits im a huge fan
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>>2420675
Thats make my day :D. Thanks!
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for part of the lavaflake thing today's topic was insect this is the first actual bug i ever drew but i kinda like it but i definitely know there's room for improvement any advice??
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>>2421451
stop copping other artists works without giving credit
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>>2421480
uh...thank you?? i guess im kinda flattered you think i stole this lol guess it can't be entire shit than
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>>2421494
>>2421480
or bait as shit >.> fuck...i cant tell...im gonna go with bait now...fuck you
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