Is this good enought?

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Anyone? :( or am I simple irrelevant pure shit? :'(

>>2419434
What is this supposed to represent?

I think /ic/ is not the place for that. This is more a board for the graphic things more than audiovisual, i guess.

Few people here actually like contemporary art and even less have something to say. (I don't feel anyone is superior either way)
Did I think you work was shit? No, I can see some potential in there.

To me, it felt a bit mundane.
I like the visuals, the music didn't add much more to what you already have.
Maybe if it was in a series of videos or in combination with other things, that it would make more of a whole.

>>2419408
Hey I actually really like this. The music paired with you drawing the air in and smoke pluming out from the pipe is really memorable.

>>2419408

It feel's like you didn't even put a small amount of effort into it.

>boring front view
>same view throughout the whole video
>bad licht
>boring background
>looks into the camera multiple times
>actor is plain as well, there is nothing that catches the viewers attention besides perhaps the messy hair.
>quality isnt great either

What is it exacly you wanted to show with the video?