artbymiel art critique

looks like a comic book cover senpai good work. legit

>>2411395
There is no light source and so the shading is too flat.
The composition is boring. Iceman's pose is too static and Gambit's pose is outrageously dynamic.
The anatomy is wrong in many places. Iceman's limbs are disproportionate and his neck is misshapen. Gambit's arm needs foreshortening to show he is extending his hand to throw or else it looks stunted.
Speaking of his thrown cards, they have no dynamism. It looks like they are two big panels just hovering in place. The linework on them is too mechanical and it makes no sense he would be throwing two of the same card (unless he just uses a deck full of the ace of spades, I don't know X-Men lore).
The lines have inconsistent thickness and seem sloppy, especially on the ice trail.
The background is bare and boring.
While we're at it, always capitalize the first letter of a sentence and don't use commas for ellipses.

>>2411566
thanx, for your honest opinion!
any positives, or suggestions for improvements